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Pure Devotion

Young moonlit eyes flame
  
    roused by infatuation
       until seasons change...

     hearts bearing nights’ languished  thorns 
as pure devotion ripens




Written 7/12/2018
Tanka 57577 Contest of Poet Doctor

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2018

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James Marshall Goff Date: 7/13/2018 3:26:00 PM Evolution of relationships so eloquently penned, Nette! Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/13/2018 10:51:00 AM You have summed up well what, changes in our seasons; I like this one. Login to Reply

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/13/2018 4:04:00 AM "Until seasons change" proves you understand that love is forever changing. Good luck in the contest, this one is a gem. Login to Reply

Lyric Man Date: 7/12/2018 10:35:00 PM Nette.. indeed this is a hot write but maturely so. Words used to effectively arouse feeling, more so than describing a static, albeit romantic, scene. You can almost touch the allure of infatuations grip. But then infatuation ripens into devotion. Beautifully painted! Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 7/12/2018 9:50:00 PM It's like pepper...it taste good but it's gonna burn...All the best nette Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 7/12/2018 4:20:00 PM Lovely poem..well written, as always, nette. Login to Reply

Daniel Turner Date: 7/12/2018 3:41:00 PM Pretty hot, nette! One must beware of the "changing seasons":) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/12/2018 2:36:00 PM - Gorgeous, Nette - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Vegter Papyrus Date: 7/12/2018 2:32:00 PM The thorns losing vitality makes me smile. That alone is poetry. What's cracking Nette? Login to Reply

Pashang Salehi Date: 7/12/2018 1:42:00 PM Hot... Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/12/2018 1:16:00 PM There is more here than meets the eyes. An enjoyable contemplation. Hugs and thanks for your visit. Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 7/12/2018 12:54:00 PM your pen is burning nette...good luck dear poet Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 7/12/2018 12:33:00 PM Well written Nette ! :) Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 7/12/2018 11:35:00 AM Lovely, nette. Beautifully penned. Login to Reply