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Pure Devotion

Young moonlit eyes flame roused by infatuation until seasons change... hearts bearing nights’ languished thorns as pure devotion ripens Written 7/12/2018 Tanka 57577 Contest of Poet Doctor

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James Marshall Goff
Date: 7/13/2018 3:26:00 PM
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Evolution of relationships so eloquently penned, Nette!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 7/13/2018 10:51:00 AM
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You have summed up well what, changes in our seasons; I like this one.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/13/2018 4:04:00 AM
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"Until seasons change" proves you understand that love is forever changing. Good luck in the contest, this one is a gem.
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Lyric Man
Date: 7/12/2018 10:35:00 PM
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Nette.. indeed this is a hot write but maturely so. Words used to effectively arouse feeling, more so than describing a static, albeit romantic, scene. You can almost touch the allure of infatuations grip. But then infatuation ripens into devotion. Beautifully painted!
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Arturo Michael
Date: 7/12/2018 9:50:00 PM
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It's like pepper...it taste good but it's gonna burn...All the best nette
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 7/12/2018 4:20:00 PM
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Lovely poem..well written, as always, nette.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 7/12/2018 3:41:00 PM
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Pretty hot, nette! One must beware of the "changing seasons":)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/12/2018 2:36:00 PM
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- Gorgeous, Nette - GL in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vegter Papyrus
Date: 7/12/2018 2:32:00 PM
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The thorns losing vitality makes me smile. That alone is poetry. What's cracking Nette?
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/12/2018 1:42:00 PM
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Hot...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 7/12/2018 1:16:00 PM
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There is more here than meets the eyes. An enjoyable contemplation. Hugs and thanks for your visit.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/12/2018 12:54:00 PM
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your pen is burning nette...good luck dear poet
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/12/2018 12:33:00 PM
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Well written Nette ! :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 7/12/2018 11:35:00 AM
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Lovely, nette. Beautifully penned.
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