Jennifer Proxenos Poet Rhyme

Pups Land On Moon Nursery Rhyme

PUPS LAND ON MOON ~ Nursery Rhyme

Two little pups called Sam and Sue
Wanted adventure, to try something new,
Why don’t we go to the moon,
They had seen it in a cartoon
Lets go today, 
But its so far away,
Jumped into their dad’s spaceship
Its moon or bust, what a trip.
They saw strange things floating outside,
All part of their ride
We are landing said Sam
Fasten your seat belt Sue, wham!
They stepped outside, first pups
To land on moon, 
Reporters would write very soon.
Wow a space mobile,
Sam the man took the wheel,
They collected rocks and sand
To take back to Earth land,
Sue started crying, I’m scared,
I want my mummy she blared.
Back on the spaceship they climbed
So well timed,
They arrived with a bump
And a loud thump!
Their mummy and daddy gave them a hug,
And dad gave Sam’s ear a tug.
Don’t ever do that in a hurry
Again, you had us in such a flurry,
They were sorry and promised to be good,
And slept as two pups should, 
Mum put on their night light, 
Kissed them, and tucked them in tight!


Contest entry : Nursery Rhyme Contest
Sponsor; Eve Roper
Date: 2021/03/09

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Paghunda Zahid April 30, 2021 at 2:51 PM This is a fav... You know how much I love moon, and how much I fancy a trip to the moon... What a wonderful write... Truly Loved it from start to end.. Stay blessed dear friend. Hugs

Robert Pettit April 5, 2021 at 12:08 PM Such a cute write, and it deserved recognition in the contest. Congratulations!

Lindsay Laurie March 17, 2021 at 9:55 PM Hello Jennifer … a delightful fairy tale that will surely delight a child Jennifer. Did they check to see if there were any bones buried there - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay

Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2021 at 3:35 AM - Back with congratulations, dear sis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jennifer Proxenos March 15, 2021 at 5:08 AM Thank-you Sunshine Smile my dear friend. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.

Gershon Wolf March 11, 2021 at 5:19 PM Those pups are so cute. I think that when they have kids, they'll be named Moonbeam and Moonlight! Adorable, Jennifer. Congrats on your win in Eve's contest. Light and Joy, Gershon Jennifer Proxenos March 15, 2021 at 5:10 AM Gershon, thank-you for such a lovely comment, I really needed it! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison March 11, 2021 at 2:55 PM Dropping back to say many congrats on your win Jennifer:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds March 11, 2021 at 1:56 PM Congratulations Jennifer, this wonderful nursery rhyme so deserved the win ~ Belle

Alexis Y. March 11, 2021 at 1:55 PM Hi Jennifer, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your fine win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Jack Horne March 11, 2021 at 12:23 PM awww, how lovely

Caren Krutsinger March 10, 2021 at 11:34 AM Absolutely darling! So well done. You may have to write a bunch of these and become the "next Mother Goose".

Michelle Faulkner March 9, 2021 at 8:59 PM What a fun adventure, we used to have a dog named Sam (but we called him Sammy) and our other one was called Sadie - wish I could have gone to the moon with sam and sue :)

Gordon Mcconnell March 9, 2021 at 12:28 PM Greatly enjoyed this one Jennifer, it flows along so well making it a lovely story to tell. Hope all well with you today It's late evening and rain is lashing down. Blessings always,Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2021 at 11:45 AM - An enchantingly sweet story, dear Jenny - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carolyn Devonshire March 9, 2021 at 10:26 AM What a cute story that would be enjoyed by many children, Jennifer! I can picture it so well through your descriptions. I'm glad the pups made it home safely! Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Beryl Edmonds March 9, 2021 at 9:57 AM That’s absolutely lovely Jennifer, children will love it for sure. A super nursery rhyme... Belle

Victor Buhagiar March 9, 2021 at 9:39 AM You should have gone with them. You would be famous.

Tom Cunningham March 9, 2021 at 9:30 AM Great nursery rhyme Jennifer, you write these so well. Tom

Alexis Y. March 9, 2021 at 9:23 AM WoW! Jennifer, I really enjoyed your entry for the contest. It was quite the adventure. And so fitting for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend from across the pond:-) Alexis Jennifer Proxenos March 15, 2021 at 5:29 AM Alexis my dear friend thank-you, have been a little scarce and will for a while longer - hubby was in hospital for 5 days, but is coming home tomorrow. Am very excited. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jan Allison March 9, 2021 at 9:11 AM absolutely charming Jennifer what a delightful rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx Jennifer Proxenos March 15, 2021 at 5:20 AM Thank you Jan and congrats to you also my friend. Hubby was in ICU for a major op. for 5 days,so have been scarce and will be for another week or so. a charming comment thank-you! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.