Luayne Fraser Poet Free verse

Puppy Love Vs True Love

************ Puppy love Vs True Love ************

                                 What an interesting journey it is
                              Thinking you know what love means
                       Feelings not familiar create desire deep within
            Curiosity leads you naively to wear your heart on your sleeve
         Life’s lessons whispered “Puppy Love” her echoes still dwell within  
        For all who are wise feel compelled to share their love tales “saying”
                 What you experiencing are mere waves in a vast ocean

                            Humbled by your embrace my true love
                                    You my moon and I your sun 
                            Our currents move in harmonic motion
                           Two souls intertwined reliving chemistry
                 Reminiscing times far older than our hosts at this time
            Perfect balance in togetherness before, beyond in all eternity

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Anil Deo April 14, 2017 at 4:05 AM Luayne, you are Number One! Congrats and heartfelt joy for rebounding all the time, in Jesus's name. Blessings this Good Friday and make sure you get those things I loved as a kid at Easter: Hot Cross Buns! (Please eat one for me; U don't have to finish a complete one, just a taste. Baie dankie, hoor!) Luayne Fraser April 14, 2017 at 7:52 AM Easter, also one of my favorite times! I most certainly will think of you while eating a Hot Cross Bun for you. Thank you, Anil ***

Eve Roper April 13, 2017 at 10:48 PM Luayne,congratulations on your win. I want to thank you for entering this beautiful write in my contest. May you have Blessed weekend… ~* Luayne Fraser April 14, 2017 at 7:46 AM Thank you very much Eve and all the same to you***

Anil Deo April 11, 2017 at 7:32 PM Sometimes spirits of "the dark" seem stronger than God's LOVE.But hang on.Jesus showed us in countless ways He defeated the devil.Fight the DARKNESS: illegitimate spirits who belong in hell because Jesus won on the cross. Listen to(google)Hillsong's Brooke Ligertwood,her song, it will make you soar. The tile, "What a wonderful name it is -name of Jesus" I pray U soar like the eagle U are my Dear SouthAfrican. I love you, Luayne. I miss "home," so thanks for being here on PS.write deonils@gmail Luayne Fraser April 11, 2017 at 7:39 PM Thank you for your guidance ***

Anil Deo April 11, 2017 at 5:44 PM i was inspired, Luayne, to write on this topic. just posted ... sien U later op hierdie bladsy. In Jesus Christ, Anil Luayne Fraser April 11, 2017 at 6:29 PM I am honored to have inspired you Anil. Your poem is truly a beautiful heartfelt write. While I am feeling quite dispirited at this time you have brought a ray of sunshine into my life and for that I am more grateful than words can express. Thank you ***

Anil Deo April 11, 2017 at 3:39 PM loved it Luayne! baie Dankie en totsiens Luayne Fraser April 11, 2017 at 3:54 PM Baie dankie Anil ***

Neil Kruger April 10, 2017 at 4:16 AM this is really beautiful Luayne Fraser April 10, 2017 at 5:03 AM Thank u :*

Darlene De Beaulieu April 6, 2017 at 8:05 PM Luayne, you wrote a bezutiful poem. A 7 Luayne Fraser April 7, 2017 at 10:51 AM Thank you very much Darlene*** Darlene De Beaulieu April 6, 2017 at 8:06 PM You wrote a beautiful poem. A 7