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Puppy Love For Micropoetry Conest

I ride a leaky newspaper raft
Adrift on the linoleum
Anxiously awaiting an
An attack of smelly
squirming happiness
covered in fuzz:
Puppy love.

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Andrea Dietrich

August 7, 2015 at 9:37 PM

cute one and so original!!

Sara Kendrick

August 7, 2015 at 4:19 PM

((())) Puppy Love Congrats! :>) SK

James Inman

August 7, 2015 at 8:34 AM

Great poem! Joy to read.

Richard Lamoureux

August 7, 2015 at 8:25 AM

I like this one a lot! Congrats.

Jan Allison

August 7, 2015 at 4:40 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations Mary:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

August 7, 2015 at 1:12 AM

Yes, Mary, true love conquers even strange damp sticky stuff.... congrats, Viv x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 7, 2015 at 12:23 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning brilliant write Mary!

Pandita Sietesantos

August 7, 2015 at 12:07 AM

Congratulations on your win,Mary! Very sweet, clever write that I enjoyed reading! It's all about Puppy Love! Pandita

Casarah Nance

August 6, 2015 at 8:17 PM

That was really cute, I had to give you an hm cause it went over the character count for the contest rules, but this was aww to read!

Mary Rotman

August 6, 2015 at 8:40 PM

Dang! I used character count and everything!

Darlene Gifford

August 1, 2015 at 9:43 AM

That's how it is, Mary. I remember those moments! You have to love that puppy to go through the smelly messes. My best to you in the contest. ~~Darlene