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Punishment

Your anger is like the sinewy arm that cracks the bullwhip of your words, tearing deep strips from the soft flesh of my heart. You can't hear me crying, can you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/30/2014 2:52:00 AM
Oh, yes I can! What a powerful write. It is just so...vivid, real. Wow! Great write. I hope the pain is gone by now...though, does pain of such an experience ever truly leave?
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Date: 6/29/2014 7:45:00 PM
Hi David, this is a very powerful write. Well done!
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David Brown
Date: 6/29/2014 8:38:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kika

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