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Punch Drunk

Smashed
            And on the rocks
         Shaken and stirred


                To a paranoid
                   Amygdaloid 
            Control deferred



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Bette Bavington Date: 9/10/2018 3:03:00 PM Enjoyed it. Short and sweet right to the message. Thank you for the visit. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/10/2018 3:52:00 PM Thank you! :) xomo

Roy Pett Date: 9/7/2018 11:55:00 AM Brilliant Maureen I can relate to your well written verse, well drunk and paranoid, well written and very clever my dear friend. :)) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/7/2018 12:40:00 PM Thank you Roy! This one inspired by a Ted Talk called "You Shake It You Break It" ;) xomo!

Winged Warrior Date: 9/6/2018 4:09:00 PM Oh, excellent Mo...what a punch...smashing poetry...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/6/2018 8:45:00 PM Thank you!!! Love and flight xomo

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer Date: 9/6/2018 7:07:00 AM LOVE THE TITLE...MY amygdaloid motivates me everytime, Maureen! Love It! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/6/2018 7:23:00 AM An old term, like shell shock ;) an updated version might be football fog lol. Yeah, we can never completely get away from our animal brain, our survival instinct center. A lovely day to you Vickie! xomo

Arturo Michael Date: 9/6/2018 7:05:00 AM Only for a short time...Paranoia is a way of life...just Kidding...All the best Maureen Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/6/2018 7:20:00 AM With an inflated amygdala alas paranoia is a way of life, the fight or flight switch stuck in the on position. Trying therapy today to calm mine :)) Thank you my friend, xomo

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/6/2018 3:00:00 AM Love it Maureen, have been shaken a few times, but we get wiser as we get older. Tom. Have soupmailed you. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 9/6/2018 6:17:00 AM With luck and perseverance we do ;) I have some luck and lots of stubborn... Thank you Tom xomo