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Pumpkins 2

Pumpkin orange and red sun
Placid silvery moon
Plurally shine upon
Pumpkins planted for sale
People, crowds of people
Prepare for fall's full moon
Pleasant Halloween night

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Andrea Dietrich

December 28, 2024 at 10:11 AM

But for the first line syllable count , this was perfect!

Sara Kendrick

December 28, 2024 at 1:30 PM

Andrea, I don't know if you are counting the orange as one syllable or two syllables. I count it as one orange said as one syllable. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

David Crandall

October 20, 2024 at 3:31 PM

You create a nice pleasant image Sara

Sara Kendrick

October 20, 2024 at 4:10 PM

Why, thank you, David. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

October 19, 2024 at 1:02 PM

Wow dear sara, youv written so many of these and i dont know which of them is the best as they are all so beautiful! I love this one and the picture youv used too, especially love “ Pumpkin orange and red sun Placid silvery moon Plurally shine upon” how pretty! I enjoyed reading this! Are you goin to enter the contest? Hope you will enter one of them: best wishes always. Sending you light alwyss

Sara Kendrick

October 19, 2024 at 1:56 PM

Yes, IE, I finally made a decision, and one is entered. Thanks for visiting them and taking time to read and comment. I appreciate the kind words. Sara K

Valsa George

October 19, 2024 at 9:54 AM

You are playing with Pleiades, planting plantations of maple and marigolds, also pooling and piling pumpkins ! :)

Sara Kendrick

October 19, 2024 at 1:55 PM

Valsa, no, I haven't written one about marigolds. Nice flowers which are resistant to insects and deer chomping on them. I appreciate the kind review...Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

October 19, 2024 at 8:41 AM

The scene you’ve set is pleasant enough! Hugs ~ Kim

Sara Kendrick

October 19, 2024 at 1:53 PM

Why, thank you, Kim. I appreciate the kind review. Sara K

Maria Williams

October 19, 2024 at 7:33 AM

Nice poem Sara. Is that you in the pumpkin patch - lol. Have a great day. Hugs Maria

Sara Kendrick

October 19, 2024 at 7:55 AM

Maria, I changed pictures on you, but no it was not me in the pumpkin patch. My husband has always managed the pumpkins. He doesn't plant them very often and they don't seem to do very well. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

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