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Pulling Me Gently

pulling me gently into a quagmire not in a quicksand way but slowly methodically sneakily steadily until I disappear into wet cement forgetting I ever was

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/22/2019 1:10:00 PM

Oooooooh scary - sounds like Schwarzenegger when he drops into red hot fire in the Terminator and disappears, but he does say - I'll be back! Great write, Hugs, Jennifer.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/22/2019 1:21:00 PM

I truly think I will be back. I think we all will. Thanks Jennifer.

David Mchattie

Date: 5/21/2019 6:56:00 PM

It's like boiling a frog. He will just stay and die as you slowly raise the temperature. Have a great day my friend.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/22/2019 12:06:00 AM

I cannot believe it but I know it is true. I appreciate your lively comment here.

Dawne Zacharias

Date: 5/21/2019 5:06:00 PM

You better call for help before the last line so we can all come a runnin to pull you out of there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/21/2019 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Dawne; when I get to this point next time I will turn to you my friend. Wink.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/21/2019 3:34:00 PM

Very mysterious and unusual piece, Caren..... Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/21/2019 5:27:00 PM

I am in an unusual mind today, my friend.