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Pull Your Blade From My Bleeding Back

Pull Your Blade From My Bleeding Back Pull your blade from my bleeding back the cut can thus bleed all the more Your deceit so deep I've lost all track your love is, crap water on a dirty shore! Stand back and watch me hurt and bleed can you destroy my lost life any deeper Such sickness feeds your twisted need I the fool, thought you great and a keeper! Pull your blade from my bleeding back the cut can thus bleed all the more Your deceit so deep I've lost all track your love is, crap water on a dirty shore! Recover I shall, from your vicious deeds hope now invades my sick, bleeding heart Someday you'll cry and send me lying pleads such will be your lies so dead from the start! Pull your blade from my bleeding back the cut can thus bleed all the more Your deceit so deep I've lost all track your love is, crap water on a dirty shore! Life returned my mind to think this out pain gone, sanity gives to me this thought Expose your evil with a just and high shout on the hatred your selfishness dearly bought! Pull your blade from my bleeding back the cut can not bleed at all any more I survived to live and love to now track sweet justice now invading your sad shore! R.J. Lindley Oct. 20,1976

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Date: 8/17/2015 11:41:00 AM
Your voice is added to the countless others that hear your words and we are in pain. An interesting an all too familiar face put on an old nemeses known as betrayal. Emile.
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Date: 8/17/2015 9:19:00 AM
Hello Robert!! A 7 + FAV from me here. What a message and what attendant imagery. This write certainly portrays the reverse image of Love (similar to what Ian mentions). This one has your usual trademark and tradecraft of poetic excellence in the creative tension of the versification and its high-quality articulation. (I noted the date you wrote this which was when I was just starting my Army career. So long ago.) Outstanding Work!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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