Pull Me Out

You laugh
As you see me stumble
Down the slippery embankment
Into the murky waters
Of a troubled mind.
 
You chuckle
As you see me thrash about
And you wonder if it’s just a show
An attention gimmick
Or whether I’ll actually drown.
 
In turn, you pity me
Wallowing in my nightmares and insecurities
Thanking God that you’re safe
On dry ground.
 
I look up at your face
As I gulp down my last breath
And sink to the waiting depths
With my hand thrust up
Wondering...
If you will stop your laughter...your pitying
Long enough...
To pull me out!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 15, 2015 at 12:37 AM
This one cuts to the core. I can feel the pain really sharp in this one! With these feelings, you've written quite an amazing composition. Michael is right down there; you do write with such deep, intense emotions, and it is clearly seen in your work. I am a fan of your poetry. Write on! Always, Laura
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