Puffed Wheat

I have been running from store to store
Searching for cereal I adore.
Quaker’s puffed wheat
Favorite treat
But I cannot find it any more.


rec'd tenth place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 13, 2011 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Favorite Cereal" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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October 9, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Congrats Joyce on an exciting win with this great Limerick on Puffed Wheat.. nothing beats the originals luv.. enjoy ..
Mehta Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Joyce
Freeman Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Joyce, Congrats. on your worthy Limerick. Agape, Moses
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October 9, 2011 at 1:49 AM
Joyce, yours was great poem. Let me go see if you have some more new ones. Congrats on the winner list. Luv, Andrea
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October 9, 2011 at 12:35 AM
DEAR ,JOYCE , CONGRATULATIONS! ;-) THANKS FOR SUPPORTING MY CONTEST, WITH YOUR FUNNY cereal LIMERICK,..ALWAYS,..P.D.
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October 3, 2011 at 3:22 PM
Dear Joyce, I can't find it anymore either and it was such a great cereal with virtually no sugar. Nowadays everyone seems addicted to cereals doused in sugar. I wonder if Quaker has stopped making it, or worse yet, if they have dipped it into a syrupy sweet concoction that's sold under another name. Thumbs up for this entry! Love, Carolyn
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October 2, 2011 at 2:30 AM
You can't find it because hardly anybody likes it. hahaha. Sorry, I just had to say that, joyce. I think your limerick is really good. I just don't know what you see in puffed wheat. Hey, I think I finally found something very different between us. You must enjoy soft things while I enjoy crunchy things!! Usually, we seem to have a lot in common! see ya later, my friend. Luv, Andrea
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September 29, 2011 at 12:16 PM
wow! hahha... thanks ..love it,..p.d.
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