Puddled

stone throw away
reflection of one's
a symphony of age?

 © Harry J Horsman 2019

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Juliet Ligon

December 27, 2019 at 4:20 PM

Great imagery.

Robert Lindley

November 17, 2019 at 7:40 AM

My friend, this is wonderfully profound and in its depths lurks the question many a poet has asked--but only gotten back the silent echoes of their own old and kind beating heart. A fav- as it is a gem..

Ravi Sathasivam

November 8, 2019 at 9:18 AM

Great one with penned well. Thanks for sharing it.

Carolyn Devonshire

November 6, 2019 at 3:07 PM

I guess a senior's bones creaking in the win could b the "symphony" of old age. Your questionku is clever, my friend. Hope you will post some new work, Harry! Hugs, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

November 5, 2019 at 6:50 PM

glad to get your message. Yeps, I think I have seen every one of your poems!!!

Elaine Perrin

November 4, 2019 at 7:59 AM

Just popping back to say congratulations :-) x

Cecilia Macfarlane

November 3, 2019 at 9:00 AM

Love your Zen. Congrats on your win Harry. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

November 2, 2019 at 6:28 AM

When I read this a couple times, becomes deeper...settles in the heart. Love the title! Congratulations, Harry!

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2019 at 8:02 PM

Nice seeing this one on the winner list, Harry. Congratulations.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 1, 2019 at 2:16 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line, Harry :) - Well done :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

November 1, 2019 at 8:49 AM

Thanks for adding your zen to my contest. ;0)

CayCay Godwin

October 31, 2019 at 4:34 PM

running questions past? I just had to say that cause the visual image tickles my tummy just as your lines did. But your lines peppered the tickle with brain stimulation making this visit a complete success. Love your random capturings! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Judy Ball

October 28, 2019 at 11:03 AM

Drop a pebble in a pond and notice the many ripples that come from that one act. Well said Harry. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

October 27, 2019 at 11:56 AM

just stopping by to say hi. Can you think of any poems of yours I have missed? thanks for reading and leaving comments on some of my poetry recently. I have been so busy, and I keep falling behind over here now!

Panagiota Romios

October 23, 2019 at 7:36 AM

Best Wishes! Panagiota

Judy Ball

October 22, 2019 at 5:13 PM

Indeed. When you drop a pebble in a pond and notice all the rings that come from the one act. For every action there is an equal and opposite reaction. So each ripple caused from that one act itself makes another ripple. hmmmm. A good write my friend. Makes one think. Good luck in the contest and God Bless, JB