Puddle

The puddle this morn 
Dappled image of the sun
Burnt and on the run
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wilson Avatar
November 24, 2011 at 12:35 PM
You have a nack for Haiku. I like the intersection of the 'burnt' with the 'puddle'. I also enjoyed the rhyme and the overall way the haiku moves from the static puddle image to the closing 'run'. Well done.
Thompson Avatar
November 26, 2011 at 4:32 AM
Thank you very much for your feedback, it is a great encouragement :)
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