Psychopath On the Road

I know the sky is beautiful, I told her
who seemed delighted with everything on the road
I'm focused on driving, I grumbled
palaces and hovels
heavens or hells,
I don't care anymore, I said
be quiet and let me drive in silence
my thoughts poisoning my brain
she's a pretty girl but she's gonna die too
it doesn't matter that she's humming so well
the dumbest song ever composed
playing on the old truck radio
she pouts with her face closed
the way is boring like her words
the next gas station is right there
bunch of rednecks playing at selling gasoline
the annoying accent spoken too loudly
my will is to accelerate on them
annihilate everything
the right front tire deflating
the steering pulls to the side
fill that tire I tell the attendant
no tip when I accelerate
leaving those people in a cloud of dust
the sun setting where we go
yes, yes, the stars are magnificent,
I reply to the childish comment she makes
I bring a baseball bat by the seat
her nose bleeds like sunlight
that dyes the dirty clouds on the horizon
she is the third only this month
at first I find them charming
then i can't control myself
they start talking
and with each word they dig a little deeper
the hole where I intend to bury them
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Date: 11/28/2022 1:16:00 PM
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Marco Chies
Date: 12/2/2022 5:42:00 PM
Hello my friend. I think the praise for EAP is sincere, correct and in line with his genius. I consider EAP as a brother, as well as Kafka and my greatest tribute to both is to think about them daily.
Date: 11/28/2022 11:50:00 AM
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Date: 4/4/2022 7:39:00 PM
Oh my, Marco, this is truly chilling! I got goosebumps reading it, and I suppose that was to be expected. I'm almost certain no psychopath would have written this, but someone who understands how they think and what they do might've. Exception writing!
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Marco Chies
Date: 4/5/2022 6:09:00 AM
Milton, I love cars, women and roads, lol lol lol... Edgar Allan Poe wrote The Raven in a technical way, he took the most beautiful, love, the saddest, death, and gave us a exceptional poem on these two themes. Evidently there is a wide gulf between a proverbially prominent poet and a poor beginner like me....
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