Psychedelic Sunshine

PSYCHEDELIC SUNSHINE

psychedelic sunshine,
with cephalopod rays,
stretches upward
to the blue-eyed heavens.

commander of sea and skies -
the waistline of the bittersweet sun -
under the tendril waves.

sweet suckers stamp stars,
visible in twilight hours,
kissed and sent to bed until then.

effervescent overtones,
bubble and foam,
with toy ships that sail
with mighty magnitude,

limited by the mercy of the sea.
a savage, boiling beast.
tis crossed precariously.

cephalopod rays, can plunge
suddenly, into the ocean depths.
clouds scurry to lambaste
the sailors, without warning.

enjoy the euphoric waters,
but don’t be fooled
by their siren daughters.

9/15/2017
Mid-September Premier contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 11:06 AM
Many adventures await, congratulations Kim...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 11:23 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Talwar Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 2:55 AM
A great addition to your awesome collection. You are truly gifted. I run from post to pillar to have one of mine chosen but no sad I'm not as gifted !.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2017 at 4:20 AM
Thank you, Bawa!
Canerdy Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Magnificent poem, Kim! Congrats on your win. Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 5:17 PM
Thank you :)
Krampe Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Awesome imagery. I love the cephalopod rays! Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 8:11 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes!
La France Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:01 AM
Thanks, Constance!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 4:02 AM
Congratulations Kim on your great win. Yes, cephalopods are strange creatures alive for millions of years.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Gupta Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 11:43 AM
Lovely ... Enjoyable images ... Good luck with the contest ...
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 2:08 PM
Thanks, Probir!
Pandit Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 11:06 AM
A wonderful weaving of words--lovely imagery of the sunshine, the sea and the lives intertwined--well done Kim--good luck for a win!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2017 at 11:18 AM
Thank you, VijaY!
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