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Psychedelic Sunshine

PSYCHEDELIC SUNSHINE psychedelic sunshine, with cephalopod rays, stretches upward to the blue-eyed heavens. commander of sea and skies - the waistline of the bittersweet sun - under the tendril waves. sweet suckers stamp stars, visible in twilight hours, kissed and sent to bed until then. effervescent overtones, bubble and foam, with toy ships that sail with mighty magnitude, limited by the mercy of the sea. a savage, boiling beast. tis crossed precariously. cephalopod rays, can plunge suddenly, into the ocean depths. clouds scurry to lambaste the sailors, without warning. enjoy the euphoric waters, but don’t be fooled by their siren daughters. 9/15/2017 Mid-September Premier contest

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Date: 9/18/2017 11:06:00 AM
Many adventures await, congratulations Kim...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2017 11:23:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 9/18/2017 2:55:00 AM
A great addition to your awesome collection. You are truly gifted. I run from post to pillar to have one of mine chosen but no sad I'm not as gifted !.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/18/2017 4:20:00 AM
Thank you, Bawa!
Date: 9/17/2017 12:13:00 PM
Magnificent poem, Kim! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2017 5:17:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 9/17/2017 7:52:00 AM
Awesome imagery. I love the cephalopod rays! Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2017 8:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Agnes!
Date: 9/17/2017 6:53:00 AM
Kim, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thanks, Constance!
Date: 9/17/2017 4:02:00 AM
Congratulations Kim on your great win. Yes, cephalopods are strange creatures alive for millions of years.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/17/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal!
Date: 9/15/2017 11:43:00 AM
Lovely ... Enjoyable images ... Good luck with the contest ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thanks, Probir!
Date: 9/15/2017 11:06:00 AM
A wonderful weaving of words--lovely imagery of the sunshine, the sea and the lives intertwined--well done Kim--good luck for a win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2017 11:18:00 AM
Thank you, VijaY!

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