Psychedelic Ecstasy

While you're touching my face so softly,
My eyes are shut and I can see,
Psychedelic butterflies,
With shades of violet,
And a reddish blue.
The colors gleam,
To the strokes
Of your
Hand.

While you're brushing my hair so gently,
I feel a warmth rush through my veins.
My head gets woozy and light,
And my pulse gets higher!
It's pure ecstasy,
And I ignite, 
Like a hot,
Flaming
Fire! 


Dawn D. Kilby 
Copyright ©2008  Dawn D. Kilby

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 11/17/2008 9:51:00 AM
Beautiful sensuous write here, Dawn and a well-deserved winner in the nonet contest. Congratulations ... its been awhile since you've written ... hope you bring more of your wonderful writing soon!
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Date: 11/16/2008 11:43:00 AM
Creative use of this challenging form. Congratulations on being one of the winners in John's contest. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/15/2008 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on placing in the contest with this wonderful poem! A double Nonet!! Good job! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/15/2008 9:02:00 AM
Warmest congrats Dawn on your excellent win in john's contest! YAY! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/27/2008 4:08:00 PM
beautiful exotic and steamy write, take care D-nyce
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Date: 10/16/2008 11:03:00 AM
This is a very passionate poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. The images in both pieces are excellent. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:52:00 AM
i love the nonet style, and a pair of them are even better...you can tell a story :P
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Date: 10/16/2008 7:51:00 AM
thanx everyone! a prelude, yes, sounds exciting :P
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Date: 10/15/2008 9:37:00 PM
Wonderful! Might be a prelude to something else... :) Teri
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:53:00 PM
A double Nonet! Very nicely done. Love the brushing of the hair - very sensual. : ) Love, Shar
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Date: 10/15/2008 6:08:00 PM
Dawn - wow that really warmed things up - Very open and beautiful poetry - God Bless
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