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Your Choice F Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand
Contest Winner MedalSecond Place

The colors of the flowers are vibrantly swaying The wind caresses them it seems with kisses, whispering sweet nothings inside cheery cores Daisy’s white pearly petals are speaking Yellow sepals smiling, too yellow! Spiky discs spinning peeking at me as I subtly study them Dance little flower dance so alive, I just want to hug and squeeze you until you feel all this love as well
colors so vibrant turned on, tuned in, so alive ~ I feel so much love

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Date: 3/29/2025 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. I like this colorful work. Sara K
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I Am Anaya
Date: 3/29/2025 9:58:00 AM
Ty Sara! I had just watched a documentary "Have A Good Trip" on Netflix, lol
Date: 12/5/2024 10:54:00 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful/fun/colorful write with a great picture. "Good Luck" Color can show love. Have a wonderful/colorful day writing away................
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/5/2024 1:14:00 PM
Ah sweet poet, I'm glad you enjoyed, it made me smile:):)
Date: 11/30/2024 6:46:00 AM
Dear Anaya, oh my what a delightful celebration of nature's beauty and the joy it brings. I just found it so enchanting, allowing me to feel the warmth and love that emanates from the flowers and the world around me. "Dance little flower dance, so alive, I just want to hug and squeeze you until you feel all this love as well." Anaya this verse beautifully captures affection, simple yet intimate joys found in nature. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend
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I Am Anaya
Date: 11/30/2024 8:36:00 AM
There is so much affection to give, Daniel if we just let it happen. It's much a part of love. Here I'm describing a happy trip, after watching "Magic Fungi" docu. Ty for such a kind and supportive comment and visit. Autumn has been kind as well, my poet friend xo
Date: 11/30/2024 1:48:00 AM
Great poem. Good luck with the contest. Kind wishes, Kai
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I Am Anaya
Date: 11/30/2024 8:32:00 AM
Oh my, I don't know what to say Kai, as it is your contest, hi?
Date: 11/29/2024 10:52:00 AM
Anaya, we hope that any transformation we undergo brings out a beautiful self rather than fear and loathing. It's clear in your case that it's all good in there! You have a wonderful way with words. Please keep doing the wonderful things you do! Smiles!!
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Duke Beaufort
Date: 11/29/2024 11:14:00 AM
Even more beautiful. Hard for me to imagine really since I am a square and thrive on structure. But I can appreciate this for sure. It's remarkable to see really and truly. A poem like this restores my faith in humanity.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 11/29/2024 11:09:00 AM
Good vibes, yes indeed! I just added a paragraph, get more of that good vibe going! Awe, you are so kind to me, Duke. Ty, keep on smiling!
Date: 11/29/2024 9:15:00 AM
Way cool, though the photo won't be seen by the judge and it really enhances the poem. Fortunately I cheated a while back to get a peek at the dancing Donald which sealed the deal lol. Oops, yesterday's tribute deleted? Hmmmm
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/29/2024 11:17:00 AM
Ahhh much better as a haibun
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I Am Anaya
Date: 11/29/2024 9:25:00 AM
Gosh, thankx a lot, lol. I don't think this haiku will stand alone either, i'm working on a Haibun (paragraph) i need to describe a 'happy trip' LOL Ty Tommy for the smiles, you're the best.

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