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Your Choice F Poetry Contest
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Contest Winner MedalSecond Place

Psychedelic

The colors of the flowers are vibrantly swaying
The wind caresses them it seems with kisses, 
whispering sweet nothings inside cheery cores
Daisy’s white pearly petals are speaking
Yellow sepals smiling, too yellow! Spiky discs 
spinning peeking at me as I subtly study them
Dance little flower dance so alive, 
I just want to hug and squeeze you
until you feel all this love as well

colors so vibrant turned on, tuned in, so alive ~ I feel so much love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it. I like this colorful work. Sara K
Anaya Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Ty Sara! I had just watched a documentary "Have A Good Trip" on Netflix, lol
Goldsmith Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 10:54 AM
WOW!!! What a wonderful/fun/colorful write with a great picture. "Good Luck" Color can show love. Have a wonderful/colorful day writing away................
Anaya Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Ah sweet poet, I'm glad you enjoyed, it made me smile:):)
Rodgers Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 6:46 AM
Dear Anaya, oh my what a delightful celebration of nature's beauty and the joy it brings. I just found it so enchanting, allowing me to feel the warmth and love that emanates from the flowers and the world around me. "Dance little flower dance, so alive, I just want to hug and squeeze you until you feel all this love as well." Anaya this verse beautifully captures affection, simple yet intimate joys found in nature. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend
Anaya Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 8:36 AM
There is so much affection to give, Daniel if we just let it happen. It's much a part of love. Here I'm describing a happy trip, after watching "Magic Fungi" docu. Ty for such a kind and supportive comment and visit. Autumn has been kind as well, my poet friend xo
Neumann Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 1:48 AM
Great poem. Good luck with the contest. Kind wishes, Kai
Anaya Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 8:32 AM
Oh my, I don't know what to say Kai, as it is your contest, hi?
Beaufort Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Anaya, we hope that any transformation we undergo brings out a beautiful self rather than fear and loathing. It's clear in your case that it's all good in there! You have a wonderful way with words. Please keep doing the wonderful things you do! Smiles!!
Beaufort Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 11:14 AM
Even more beautiful. Hard for me to imagine really since I am a square and thrive on structure. But I can appreciate this for sure. It's remarkable to see really and truly. A poem like this restores my faith in humanity.
Anaya Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 11:09 AM
Good vibes, yes indeed! I just added a paragraph, get more of that good vibe going! Awe, you are so kind to me, Duke. Ty, keep on smiling!
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