Psalm For a Material Age

I sing to You 
from an empty vessel,
for You gave me 
my eternal voice.
All about me are lost, 
all are deaf
to Your voice 
as it flies on the wind
and none can see, 
all blind beggars
unaware of their 
deep, deep poverty....

Your beauty is everywhere: 
sunlight and moonlight and 
the grace of birds
in their flight of freedom, 
and trees standing tall 
as guardians and oceans
whose waves crest eternally, 
and Your grace...ah, 
THAT  is what holds
the Universe itself together, 
and in us it is 
the love that calms, 
the love that pulls 
meaning from death
and gives hope 
to those who reach out--
to You....

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Date: 5/28/2021 4:01:00 PM
LJ, I love this beautiful prayer you have written! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 5/8/2020 2:25:00 AM
Congratulations On Your Place Bravo!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/8/2020 2:34:00 PM
Thank you, Gideon!
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Gideon Idudje
Date: 5/8/2020 2:32:00 AM
Date: 5/1/2020 10:17:00 AM
LJ, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest _Constance
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/2/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thank you. Constance--and may you go with God in these fraught times....
Date: 4/30/2020 3:00:00 PM
LJ - congratulations on this poem prayer with its delightful and innovative imagery - "grace...that holds the Universe together," "an empty vessel," and so many more. So glad to see it on the winners list. Blessings!
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L. J. Carber
Date: 5/2/2020 12:19:00 PM
Thanks Sam--it's always a special treat to hear from you--may the Lord's Light shine on you and yours always!
Date: 9/27/2019 10:33:00 AM
So pretty, congrats.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/27/2019 11:35:00 AM
Thank you, Richard, I appreciate it
Date: 9/27/2019 4:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem,L.J. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/27/2019 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise
Date: 9/26/2019 11:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win... beautifully done. God bless you
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L. J. Carber
Date: 9/27/2019 11:36:00 AM
Thank you Regina, and may God keep you as well
Date: 3/18/2018 3:09:00 PM
These words are inspiring and uplifting, L.J. David would have been tempted to collaborate with you! Congratulations on your merited win. Regards // paul
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/19/2018 9:26:00 AM
Thank you Paul-- I don't think I've ever had so great a compliment, for I find it a bit wondrous how true the psalms speak to the human condition after 3 millennia.
Date: 3/18/2018 3:06:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win, LJ - blessings and best wishes to you, friend! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/18/2018 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Gregory,and may God keep always you and yours, my friend.
Date: 3/17/2018 6:13:00 PM
L.J., inspiring and well done , enjoyed reading.. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/18/2018 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I'm glad you like it.
Date: 3/17/2018 2:23:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, L.J :) - Congratulations :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/18/2018 10:14:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine (great pen name!)
Date: 3/17/2018 10:26:00 AM
Your second stanza is spectacular. Well done, L.J. Congrats.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 3/17/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thank you, Line-- you know, I'm always amazed at the occasional 'moment of beauty' that comes to me, always of its own volition it seems, unbidden.
Date: 2/18/2018 4:54:00 PM
You could be a Sufi poet.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 2/19/2018 10:13:00 AM
That is one of the best compliments I've ever got! Ironically, I've been studying Sufism (Idries Shah,etc.) this past year, and have read some of the great Sufi poets, so perhaps it's 'seeped' through.
Date: 1/23/2018 11:19:00 PM
Beautiful Message "Your grace...ah, that is what holds the Universe itself together, and in us it is the love that calms, the love that pulls meaning from death and gives hope to those who reach." Lovely
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/24/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Muhammad, I glad you liked it.
Date: 1/23/2018 1:47:00 PM
Oh.. I can see why this poem a winner. Congratulations. Have a nice day my friend.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/24/2018 9:49:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, much appreciated !
Date: 1/21/2018 10:59:00 AM
Great poem, congrats on your win L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/21/2018 1:10:00 PM
Thank you, Keith, I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 1/20/2018 12:45:00 AM
WOW - I see this is a winning poem, and I concur that is should be, was winning to me. Rarely do I fav poems (cause then I have to keep up with them), but all of me resonates with each image and line of passionate spiritual meaning - a beautiful interlude with Him. Felt that. All the best ... CayCay
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/20/2018 9:44:00 AM
Please share what NDE represents. I'm guessing Non-denominational something? Please educate me when time permits. My husband and I are both curious. All the best ... CayCay
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/20/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thanks you CayCay-- Since I found God-- and the reality of my soul through an NDE in my troubled 20's, I've had at times the almost tangible sense that this world, one's lifetime, is truly a dream which sooner or later we all awake from.
Date: 1/19/2018 11:52:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, LJ - blessings and keep up the wonderful work! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/20/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Gregory-- I appreciate deeply your kind encouragement-- though to be honest, the poems, all my writing, seem to come to me, unbidden, uncontrollable- my job seems to be to write them down before I forget them-- really!
Date: 1/18/2018 3:07:00 PM
Great poem, great win. Congrats.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/18/2018 10:16:00 PM
Thank you, Richard, I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 1/17/2018 8:21:00 PM
Congrats on your very well deserved win, L.J.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/17/2018 10:18:00 PM
Thank you LG, much appreciated!
Date: 1/17/2018 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! :-)
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/17/2018 10:19:00 PM
Thanks Eve
Date: 1/17/2018 3:43:00 PM
L.C. Carber, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/17/2018 10:20:00 PM
Thank you Skat-- I am much honored, poet to poet....
Date: 1/16/2018 11:14:00 PM
I've never seen anyone write a Psalm before. Very cool! I really enjoyed your message.
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L. J. Carber
Date: 1/17/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you Laurie-- your kind words are much appreciated.
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