Psalm 23 Computer Machine and Appliance Edition

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May 20, 2024 4.10pm


The Lord is my technician, 
I shall not err
He makes me work effectively well in my workplace
He brings me back my good condition
He screwed my loose parts firmly in His side.
He repairs the spare parts of my body and soul
for my wellness, holiness and proficiency sake.

Even though I work overtime as needed;
I still have time for Him, 
Thy divine tool and Holy Spirit fix me
Thou apply conversion lubricants to my rusty parts and soul;
My engine and spirit runneth smoothly,
Surely productivity and efficiency shall generate on me 
all the days of my missions
And my owner will be glad on me 
And I will function well in His company as long as I live.

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Len Gasun

Date: 5/31/2024 6:38:00 PM

Modern Version Psalms 23 Contest Judged: 5/22/2024 7:34:00 PM Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley Place: 1 (up to 5 and HM multi-winners)

Valsa George

Date: 5/24/2024 4:20:00 AM

Congratulations dear Len on your top placement. Fortunate is the one who has time for God in the midst of the hustle and bustle of life. A beautiful poem with a great message.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2024 10:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, uplifting comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. We should always find time for HIm day and night. Again thank you so much. God bless you always and your writngs. Hugs

Miranda Hawley

Date: 5/22/2024 8:01:00 PM

The Lord is a technician and that is a fact that I've never thought about. You so perfectly explained how and why. Congrats on your high win in my contest.

Len Gasun
Date: 5/25/2024 10:03:00 AM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your challenging contest my dear poet friend. I just gave a try coz it was quite hard for me but I did it from my heart. Thank you so much. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/20/2024 9:25:00 AM

WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your very creative "Psalm 23" write. I love this. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Hugs... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away........

Len Gasun
Date: 5/21/2024 12:30:00 AM

Thanks a lot for reading my poem and your encouraging comments my dear poet friend, Paula. Actually, I did it really for long hours thinking about the edition to be written my dear, ha ha ha. So this was the outcome. I decided to follow the given example. In fact, my muse is quite elusive up to now. Thank you so much again. Blessings always to you and your writings. Hugs