Providence's Beacon

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" BOATS " MY PHOTO, ©

May be an image of nature and ocean

Every soul, a boat is, Crafted by God to withstand the fiercest storms That life’s ocean could ever generate Provided Her captain would never lose sight of Providence’s guiding beacon And Would never abandon her, To the malicious waves of lawlessness, and Sin! © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 September 2021

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/2/2021 10:20:00 AM

You stated it perfectly. Retain a strong hand on the steering wheel, constantly on guard, and rest full trust in the master. Wisely done, my friend Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2021 11:24:00 AM

My friend, Lasaad, thank you for your gracious visit and comment! Blessings!

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/2/2021 9:11:00 AM

And one should trust the captain... Yours are the words of wisdom... Thanks for sharing... Lovely photo...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2021 11:23:00 AM

Thank you so much for your generous comment, my dearest friend, Supraja! Hugs xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/2/2021 2:32:00 AM

So true Demetrios, we have to keep a steady hand on the wheel at all times forever on guard. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2021 4:04:00 AM

Yes, my dearest friend, Tom, the rudder must always be in the hands of virtue! Thank you very much for your wonderful visit and comment! Stay safe!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2021 1:47:00 AM

Such wise words, Demetrios:)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 9/2/2021 4:02:00 AM

Thank you so much my loving little sister, Jo! Hugs xxx