Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

Proverbial Love

I heard them say~love is blind,                                                                        that was not very kind.                                                                                     Maybe our love will be intertwined,                                                                      or maybe just blowing in the cool wind.                                                             Will this blind love unwind,                                                                           should we ask mankind.                                                                                   You were a pretty good find,                                                                               at least in my crazy mind.     

 
Date Written: 2/8/2023

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Beata Agustin February 12, 2023 at 8:25 PM Thanks for sharing this. May I also share the love of God with you through an encouraging verse from the John 3:16 of the King James Bible: "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you. Also, thanks so much for constantly uplifting me with your comments. Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2023 at 1:24 PM Thanks for your note. As part of the world, love sure can be blind. Love does come form above. I like John 3:16. Thanks for adding it. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

M. L. Kiser February 12, 2023 at 2:32 PM Oh yes, it has proven itself to be blind in many ways and over millennia. Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2023 at 1:21 PM Thanks for your note. Oh yes, love sure can be blind. Guess it is part of life. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Panagiota Romios February 12, 2023 at 10:57 AM Divorce is sad. But necessary if there is Violence. In word or deed. Loving people do not harm partners. **In friendships, the evil ones do all they can to dismiss you or embarass you. It’s done here. I have copies of horrific statements. It’s hard for me to trust as I once did.. so you see less commenting. From me. Worse, who you thought were real friends fallin love deeply with those who hate you. Groups will not read you who once did. Panagiota More damaging than trolls. Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2023 at 1:19 PM Thanks for your note. Glad to see you here. Divorce is very sad. I have seen it with my friends. Too bad all people do not have Love in their hearts and Not evil. Guess that is here until we get to heaven where there will be Love/Peace. So sorry you have been hurt. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Andrea Dietrich February 12, 2023 at 10:21 AM love this one, and it's profound Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2023 at 1:12 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you love my "Proverbial Love" write. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Unseeking Seeker February 8, 2023 at 5:33 PM Superb write, dear Paula ~ enjoyed every line! Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2023 at 12:50 PM Thanks for your note. So glad you enjoyed every line and you called it superb. That is great to hear. (Thank You) Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Deb M February 8, 2023 at 3:15 PM Fun poem Paula….enjoyed …..Debx Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2023 at 12:47 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Sotto Poet February 8, 2023 at 1:35 PM Love is the nurturing of feelings and an assessment of one's partner's persona. Never allow it to become unable to see. Paula, your writing is superb. Enjoyed Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2023 at 12:46 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my "Love" write. Also Thank You for your very kind words. You made my day. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Stephan McBride February 8, 2023 at 1:23 PM Love your style of writing, this is great fun and humorous: ) Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2023 at 12:43 PM Thanks for your note. Glad you like my "Love" write. Your very kind words made my day. Thank You. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................

Victor Buhagiar February 8, 2023 at 12:29 PM Love is a build-up of affection and a study of character. It should never be blind. Paula Goldsmith February 9, 2023 at 12:40 PM Thanks for your note. Yes, "Love" should never be blind. I was writing from an old saying about love. I have seen it with a few couples that are now divorced. So Sad. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.........................