Proud Third Wheel

See them hand in hand,
Together they shine brightly
Smiles on both faces
So sweet and caring to me,
Who could ever wish them apart?

Boy asks for gift help,
Girl  matches my craziness,
Perfect for eachother,
An adorable couple,
Hopes and expectations rise.

Gazing gleefully,
Into another's  bright eyes,
Example of love,
Now forever together,
May your paths stay bound as one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Thomas Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Elissa a beautiful write about true bonding!
Quigley Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 7:19 PM
They sound pretty right for each other...even at such a tender age.
Quigley Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 6:58 PM
I agree. Thanks abba
Godwin Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 9:10 PM
A sweet and well-done dedication to your friends! CayCay
Quigley Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 6:58 PM
thank you CayCay
Turner Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 3:51 PM
It does make the heart a little lighter to see two people in love. Great write of friendship, Elissa.
Quigley Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Thank you daniel. It is nice to see a relationship in highschool, that is about more than looks, and had boundaries, and mutual respect.
Smith Avatar
September 30, 2016 at 1:09 PM
A great gift to them Elissa.
Quigley Avatar
April 6, 2017 at 6:57 PM
thank you tim
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