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waiting with diaper on for this woman to get up off the kitchen floor and stop bleeding while a man hovers over her with grimace and clinched fist waiting for our first-grade teacher to stop crying over the P.A. announcement that the president has just been assassinated in Dallas waiting on the spirit of Christmas to return days after the news that mother's favorite song "You Send Me" had just been shot and killed a few blocks from our home waiting in the backseat of a Packard for the policeman to stop screaming at my father as urban soldiers toss fire from their hands in our neighborhood just outside of Watts waiting at LAX for Wilt the Stilt to come back and finish signing autographs after some idiot just called him a freak waiting for the bowtie and scowl to let go of my arm so I can shake the hand of the Greatest of All Time as he starts his comeback with an exhibition bout in East Los Angeles waiting with eighteen-year-old trembling knees for that sheriff deputy to remove his pump action shotgun from my temple waiting in the delivery room for the wrong woman to have my child waiting at a motel for the right woman to find the time to slip away waiting on the side of the ninety-one freeway for a motorcade to pass shortly after the funeral of a former president shamed by the Watergate scandal waiting and looking while holding onto the entry gate at 875 S. Bundy Dr. for some sign of what really happened that night waiting along with F.E.M.A. and the Red Cross for the distraught woman to come with us to safety days after the Northridge earthquake leveled her million-dollar home waiting at the hospital for my first grandchild to be born while her father who's been convicted of battery is nowhere to be found waiting, waiting seems like I'm always waiting

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Date: 7/14/2020 9:47:00 AM
Richard, as always, your powerful and poignant pen pulls me into the very ink spilled on your poetic page. An emotionally and physically moving piece born of the cycle of violence that comes full circle conveyed with both an intimate sensitive artistry and a heartbreaking reality. The repetition of 'waiting' emphasizes the constancy of the sense of sadness, disappointment, angst and the delay of fulfillment, justice, happiness. A palpable tension created with finesse. A stunning masterwork and personal history, dear poet. Your haunting poem is inspiring on so many levels. A fav. Thank you for your soulful sharing, Richard. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
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Ricky Muse
Date: 12/20/2020 8:50:00 AM
Please forgive me for overlooking your always heartfelt reply. Me getting old you know. This is definitely one of the most personal poems I've ever written. Thanks again. Be safe and be blessed.
Date: 11/21/2017 5:45:00 AM
A sad lifelong story. Best wishes for your future days.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 2/3/2018 12:33:00 PM
Stina I guess you could say this poem is one big outpouring. Thanks for stopping bye..........peace!
Date: 10/14/2017 10:57:00 AM
Well written, I love it!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 10/14/2017 1:11:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words Rose. This poem was so therapeutic. All the best...................peace!
Date: 9/25/2017 8:45:00 AM
Hello Richard, this is the very first poem of yours I have read. I'm not sure how others react but let me say this; the Life lived in this poem is a testament to the inner strength and determination of one person to see life through to its natural conclusion. Very powerful and emotional read I am so thankful I took the time to view it. Well done my friend and well written
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/25/2017 8:57:00 PM
I was writing down events in my life. The word "waiting" kept popping up and I don't know why. The next thing I know, poem. I dig when that happens. Thanks my friend.............peace!
Date: 9/24/2017 7:55:00 PM
wow, you covered a lot of ground with this one , Richard. Of course these things happened, but were they all true personal experiences you had yourself? Goodness! It's bad enough to see them on the tv screen. So much injustice in this world that you summed up with this poem.
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/24/2017 9:48:00 PM
Yes Andrea everything in this poem actually happened to me. I guess you could say I was reflecting on a life lived so far. Thanks for your support...................peace!
Date: 9/23/2017 8:20:00 PM
It is difficult to put in a few words my reactions to this piece. Anger at the abuse, disappointment at the fact we humans don't seem to be evolving away from violence. Hope for the new life and much more. A poem that calls forth many feelings. Good work!
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Ricky Muse
Date: 9/24/2017 9:46:00 PM
Poetry is therapy for me. It beats the heck out of taking a pill. Thanks for stopping bye..................peace!

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