Eve Roper Poet Free verse

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Proposal Brought a Blush To Her Cheeks

Drifting slow above the steel-tracks 
      He runs up to the train’s window as her back 
        Faces him, yells out her name.
          "Will you be my wife?" 
              Her blushing cheeks flame.



7/27/2022

Short Verse Inspired By Pictures Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Lisa YY
inspired by the Picture
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/578431145904762475/

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Brandy Nicole August 4, 2022 at 4:56 PM This scene you have painted is so beautiful and romantic. I'm sure she will say yes. You have created a masterpiece, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Pashang Salehi July 31, 2022 at 4:33 PM What was the ANSWER? Hopefully Yes...

Harry Horsman July 30, 2022 at 10:09 PM Eve, this is truly wonderful. An entire episode with so few words, Best for a win.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 30, 2022 at 3:05 AM - Beautiful and romantic, Eve - Best wishes in the contest - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Panagiota Romios July 27, 2022 at 7:39 PM Apropos picture and beautiful poem, Eve Panagiota xxx

Rico Leffanta July 27, 2022 at 6:47 PM I always wondered about the origin of, "smoke gets in your eyes" . . ..Aloha!

Tom Cunningham July 27, 2022 at 1:08 AM You interpreted the picture well Eve, I hope she said yes. Best of luck. Tom

Victor Buhagiar July 27, 2022 at 12:56 AM Beautiful poem that captures the essence of the proposed picture. Best for a win.