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Drifting slow above the steel-tracks He runs up to the train’s window as her back Faces him, yells out her name. "Will you be my wife?" Her blushing cheeks flame. 7/27/2022 Short Verse Inspired By Pictures Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lisa YY inspired by the Picture https://www.pinterest.com/pin/578431145904762475/

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Date: 8/4/2022 4:56:00 PM
This scene you have painted is so beautiful and romantic. I'm sure she will say yes. You have created a masterpiece, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 7/31/2022 4:33:00 PM
What was the ANSWER? Hopefully Yes...
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Date: 7/30/2022 10:09:00 PM
Eve, this is truly wonderful. An entire episode with so few words, Best for a win.
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Date: 7/30/2022 3:05:00 AM
- Beautiful and romantic, Eve - Best wishes in the contest - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/27/2022 7:39:00 PM
Apropos picture and beautiful poem, Eve Panagiota xxx
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Date: 7/27/2022 6:47:00 PM
I always wondered about the origin of, "smoke gets in your eyes" . . ..Aloha!
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Date: 7/27/2022 1:08:00 AM
You interpreted the picture well Eve, I hope she said yes. Best of luck. Tom
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Date: 7/27/2022 12:56:00 AM
Beautiful poem that captures the essence of the proposed picture. Best for a win.
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