Proposal

.                  "Will you marrY me?",
.                             He askEd with a smile.
.                                        She downed her head and cried.
. Tomorrow she leaves for New York
.                                       TO persue her dream as a dancer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Macgregor Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 12:09 AM
I've never read an acrostic in this form before. I usually only see the very first letter in each line spell the word. Good conveyance of emotion.
Palli Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:50 AM
Excellent
Wood Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 10:08 AM
Yes, Doris, it does say Yes/No. I'm a teacher and we are studying acrostics today. I showed several examples then wrote one on the board off the top of my head. I like to model for my students to show them that poetry is so very easy if they will let it be.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 29, 2010 at 8:56 AM
cute poem, does the accrostic say yes/no?
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