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Proposal

. "Will you marrY me?", . He askEd with a smile. . She downed her head and cried. . Tomorrow she leaves for New York . TO persue her dream as a dancer.

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Caro Macgregor

Date: 4/20/2010 12:09:00 AM

I've never read an acrostic in this form before. I usually only see the very first letter in each line spell the word. Good conveyance of emotion.

Susan Palli

Date: 3/29/2010 10:50:00 AM

Excellent

Betty Wood-Rush

Date: 3/29/2010 10:08:00 AM

Yes, Doris, it does say Yes/No. I'm a teacher and we are studying acrostics today. I showed several examples then wrote one on the board off the top of my head. I like to model for my students to show them that poetry is so very easy if they will let it be.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/29/2010 8:56:00 AM

cute poem, does the accrostic say yes/no?