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Promising My Love

Painting a picture of porcupines playing Pincushions parked in the field Purple and pink for this playful perception Plans of their purpose revealed Painful endeavors of pacified pranksters Preparing a pie at their place Pecan or pumpkin, pickle, pineapple Pieces are smeared on their face Putting the paint on some powder puff paper Pleasure in each stroke is plied Pausing to peer at some porpoises playing Prancing in pansies they hide Puzzling problems with pretzels and peanuts Posturing people to prove Pistachio perfume in prime presentation Preaches that peaches will move Polishing pastels on pre-printed pages Prized the possessions we seek Paisley the plumes of a peacocks posterior Portraits now come take a peek Pampering pelicans play the piano Pure as a piccolos prayer Picking a parcel of plum flavored pudding Poetic prose fills the air Pleats in my pants shout in proud proclamation Puddle my pores that perspire Poodles on playgrounds prevent prosecution Plotting my hearts pure desire Passion precedes every past tense of parting Piled with a presence so true Painting a picture while purposely dreaming Promising my love to you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/2/2016 3:53:00 PM
peppered with phrases of pleasure, chris... ohh pure pizazz!.. huggs
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 4:02:00 PM
Thanks so very much Nette. : ) Pleased you paused here for a moment.
Date: 12/2/2016 2:41:00 PM
Wow Chris ! Now that is an amazing write!! I like the first 2 lines so much. I was laughing to start with, then amazed how you came up with the rest of this! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 3:04:00 PM
Thank you Heidi, I am so happy you had fun reading my P'd off poem. :)
Date: 12/2/2016 2:35:00 PM
Peachy piece of preponderance...enjoy the weekend
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 3:03:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim I 'preciate it
Date: 12/2/2016 2:08:00 PM
- I must say that this is prime presentation, Chris - a 7 - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 2:15:00 PM
Ha, thanks so much my precious pal. :) I appreciate you Anne-Lise.
Date: 12/2/2016 2:02:00 PM
So very entertaining...Loved it Chris...Happy Wkend.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 2:14:00 PM
Thank you my sweet friend so very much. I hope you have a happy weekend too.
Date: 12/2/2016 1:47:00 PM
oh my, this is a tongue-twister! This made me smile so much... especially the second to last stanza haha that first line is amusing :D and I love that final stanza, brings it down to a sweet ending. AWESOME!!
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 2:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Rebecca and thank you for highlighting the first line of my poem in your comments as that alerted me somehow to the fact that I used the word porcupines twice in the poem, I have fixed that hiccup. :)
Date: 12/2/2016 1:29:00 PM
Love itself is an exquisite work of intricate art. Another beautiful, touching, inspiring poem, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 12/2/2016 2:12:00 PM
That it is....thank you so very much Christy. I am happy you liked this one

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