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Promising Hopes, Hopeless Promises

Smiling faces, tearful traces, Twinkling stars, lonely hours. The hurt is yet to heal, while we have another in line to deal. Promising hopes, hopeless promises, there's a lot of scope but unwanted blemishes. Giving everyone smiling tears, still there's no value for your efforts all these years. Smiling grievances, grieving smiles, smilar differences, never ending miles. You seem to know everything but know nothing, living a life is easier than jumping off a building.

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Date: 9/24/2024 9:48:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 8:07:00 PM
Srujana Satyavada, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/30/2015 5:00:00 PM
Srujana Satyavada, a pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY NEW YEAR ...... SKAT
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