Promises In September's Magic, Collaboration With Nik Canada7

“Promises in September's magic”
“promesse nella magia di settembre”

Sweet September arrives again, 
hearing the celestial melody and 
symphony of a nocturnal wind 
calling your name, beneath a 
shimmering rain of stardust, my Venus.
I picture your rare beautiful soul 
gazing at the glowing moon, 
searching for mine in the firmament, 
closing your eyes in abandon, 
to the soft touch of the breeze, 
my korean princess.

Enveloped in your rhapsodic cadence, 
I can hear autumn's footsteps, 
emerging from its seclusion, 
kinetically flickering amidst mahogany foliage 
rustling in remnants of summer musings, 
as I wear a crown of marigolds, 
graciously framing the aspen 
contours of my enigmatic aura.

Let the autumn winds dance through 
your hair beneath our tangerine sunset, 
walking along the boulevard of our 
diamond dreams, hand in hand, 
reaching serenity in promises of 
tomorrows and whispers of love, 
my Aphrodite.
There is magic in the autumn air, 
merging our sapphire emotions in depth, 
with your divine essence, like the 
lifeblood that wraps me in an 
elysian bliss of our vows, to be 
the cure and light for each other, 
crossing over storms, adversities and 
darkness, my marvelous creature.
I patiently wait for dawn, 
hearing your heartbeat with mine, 
playing our love song, amidst your 
enchanting, breathtaking smile, 
gazing into my eyes, as I 
get lost in your beauty, for you 
are the first marvel in this world, 
my blue rose.

I wish I could float with the clouds, 
beyond silken horizons, 
gliding towards your 
euphoric essentia, pondering; 
what hides deep in the shadows?
Stumbling upon vast constellations, 
discovering your mesmeric aphrodisia, 
binding my heart and soul to yours, 
breathing in our burgeoning love story.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 10/11/2023 2:08:00 AM
Such a beautiful, romantic collaboration. Much admiration to you both. Exquisite line after line of such profound love.The vivid imagery captures the reader as your own love has. ‘ I can hear autumn’s footsteps’’ merging our sapphire emotions in depth’(September’s birthstone and mine!)’beyond silken horizons’.Simply divine. Loved it. Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you both.
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Date: 10/10/2023 5:21:00 PM
"the cure and light for each other" Oh, how I loved that line! Very beautiful poetry!
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Date: 10/8/2023 2:10:00 AM
FSS and Nik, this is a beautiful, charming poem with wonderful romantic lines throughout. A masterful collaboration...well done to both of you. ~Charlie
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Date: 10/10/2023 2:46:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much, kind soul! Your so graceful and thoughtful comment has truly lifted my spirits and your kind words so encouraging! I’m truly honored! We truly thank you, Charles!
Date: 10/7/2023 6:33:00 PM
Theres so many lines here that made me go wow! How flawlessly your imagery flows and i love the first stanza about staring at the same moon that glows and also how you’ve used colors here and gems is so very creative of you both. When you both write together it is even better as your words merge and emanate magic that touches readers soul! Lovely couple and lovely poem! sweetness overflowing
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Date: 10/10/2023 2:48:00 PM
Awww! Thank you always my beautiful soul sis for your always such uplifting and beautiful words! Your poetic thoughts truly is an honor to receive coming from such a brilliant poetess such as yourself and always so giddy to receive! Haha! Thank you for always looking so beautifully on mine and nik’s collabs! You are such a poetic heart, mind and soul!
Date: 10/6/2023 12:04:00 PM
Lovely collaboration... full of romantic lines..
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Date: 10/7/2023 1:10:00 PM
Awww, you didn’t tell us to get a room! Haha! Oh wait, that’s just in comments right? XD thank you so much, my dear friend silent one, for your always lovely feedback! :)
Date: 10/5/2023 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful love duet. I have a Korean princess too. You guys write awesome together
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Date: 10/7/2023 1:11:00 PM
Awww! Do you?? Hehe! I’m sure she is as beautiful as the moon sun and stars! Thank you so much for your always kind and encouraging words, my friend! :)
Date: 10/5/2023 1:57:00 PM
Ahhhhh amore i love this so much ? your deep passionate words show me your eternal unconditional lovr within you rare beautiful soul amd gold heart, my blue rose. Writing with you is a honor and pride merge my sapphire emotion wirh yours creating magic and enchanting pureness of our deepest sentiment,my korean princess. Because you live i live for eternity Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio. ?? i love you deeply micia .mia passione..tuo.. il nostro eterno amore
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Date: 10/7/2023 1:26:00 PM
Ahhh..to write with your magnificent mind, heart, spirit and beautiful soul..it’s truly an honor, my love..words flow so flawlessly when I write with you..straight from my heart and soul..falling deeper and deeper into you and your words of love..I’m so blessed to be yours and so blessed you’re mine..my truest, purest great love..I breathe you in, seeing life through the beauty of your blue eyes..making all so breathtaking..so comforting and filled with passion. I love you so deeply to the moon and everywhere..il nostro Eterno amore, tua noi Infinito, Mia passione per sempre <3
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