Promises

His hat sat
cocked,
toward his chin
like a swainish boat,
afeared in masculinity,
not coy; cocksure, 
but rebuffing
the skeptical in-laws.

Sharp, his uniform,
raven-black, white t-shirt,
seriously buffed oxfords.

Did he even move his lips
when he spoke the script;
she remembers hers,
insistent on the promise.

“I do,” delivered. I doubts,
reserved past the honeymoon.
White the glare of the moon.
Spectator stars
keep their mouths shut.

An angel, with a sure smile,
rests her hand upon her chin.
She knows it will take a while
for claws to retract, to polish
their tongues. She has time;
they think they’ve none,

but they do “I do,” looking ahead,
looking back at the good times,
looking at future generations.
Hoping that the kids keep
their promises. An angel
has her eyes on them too.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 3:08 PM
beautifully penned.....to this day I still hope angels are watching over my stepchildren.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:08 PM
So agree…when we pray, assured as child of God, that the Lord watches over our children, sends his angels to surround them.
Smith  Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 7:15 PM
Promises made with such deep conviction deserve to be kept by all who are touched by them.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 4:30 AM
Thank you, Alison! :)
Hind Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 5:46 PM
beautiful langaugeeeee Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 6:57 PM
Thank you, Paige! I had fun writing!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 1:03 PM
Your "Promises" is a creative write. Love It... Angels always watch over with a smile. Yep, they do have their eye on the kids/adults. So Be Good...  Have a fun day writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Delighted that you found this creative!Hugs, Paula!
Poet Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Dear Kim, this is really lovely and calming. Wanting the kids to follow through on their commitments. Forever and ever, an angel watches over them as well. Love perceives only love. The very essence of being! Wishing you a fantastic evening!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 4:08 PM
Have a happy evening, dear one, and thank you!
DiMino Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 9:23 AM
"Hoping that the kids keep their promises. An angel has her eyes on them too." -- Will always and forever. Love only sees love.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2026 at 11:01 AM
Thank you, Joe!
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