Promises

Promises:

Made in abundant,
like the infinite universe.
Far from completion,
like the distance between galaxies.
Sucking on life,
like a black hole.

You made promises,
like graffiti in comics,
just remained in those pages,
and never to life.
like lipstick on my lips,
when rubbed it vanished,
as vapor on a hot pan.

Your words were,
like flavors on my tongue,
changing with every food.
like  sand from the shore,
receding with every wash.
Like writings on a whiteboard,
one slap and Erased.

Your promises were,
Like  glass bangles on my hand,
little stress and shatter into pieces.
Like the icicle on my coat’s fur,
one blow and scattered into oblivious.

Your promises were wrapped,
Like sweet dreams, dipped in molasses,
Beautifully portrayed, like Mona Lisa.
But inside,infested with crawling worms,
Draining me out of life,
making my intestine parched,
like an used rope,
Stinging me,
like a million cactus.
Having push of innumerable bulls,
To drown me  deep,
Making my breath count,
And tuning my pulse to beat like a drum.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 1:01 PM
Your words pour straight from your heart to pen a story with realistic emotions and imagery. I love the way it transforms at each stage. Subtle poetry this is. Congratulations on your win Omika. So glad I got to read from you. :) Much love
Mishra Avatar
June 7, 2020 at 9:14 AM
Thanks a lot for your comments...I am so happy you like it...:)
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June 6, 2020 at 7:29 AM
You made promises, like graffiti in comics, just remained in those pages, and never to life.... That is great descriptive writing.. Great poem.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Mishra Avatar
June 6, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Thanks a lot for your kind words and the placement..I am glad you liked my work. :)
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
June 2, 2020 at 7:40 PM
Wonderful use of metaphors in your emotional verse, Omika...hugs, Rhonda
Mishra Avatar
June 3, 2020 at 12:32 AM
Thanks a lot for your kind words Rhonda :)
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