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Promised Gleams

The sky wears a peachy shawl Gentle ushering in the dawn There is a promised gleam of light Into this new day both joy and sadness will come Chirping birds entertain with their melody Leaving a song in the heart Bring in new ideas to rearrange the status quo Infinite possibilities lie ahead Favoring those who will seize the day

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David Crandall

Date: 2/3/2025 6:50:00 PM

Hmm, I guess we should look at each new day as possibilities.

Valsa George

Date: 2/3/2025 5:05:00 PM

A new day is a wake up call. The day gives a mixed bag of happiness and sorrow. Those who can seize the opportunities, each day offers is a winner in life. Beautiful thoughts in a well constructed poem dear Joseph.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/1/2025 9:27:00 PM

Nice one Joaeph, each day brings it's own surprises, some happy some sad but taken in totality they make us stronger - Hope you have a wonderful day love your write. Blessings Jennifer

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/28/2025 2:55:00 AM

Carpe diem, Joseph:) nice one:)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/23/2025 1:38:00 AM

Nearly all my friends come from the USA, and all I read is how cold it is. Well, spring will soon come, and with it, some warmth.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2025 9:36:00 AM

I agree with Ink. Peachy shawl is SO perfect here. Oh, I wanted you to know I like your contest idea. Sure do hope something comes to me!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/13/2025 8:14:00 AM

I absolutely love the opening line in this dear Joseph! Such stunning imagery throughout. Favoring those that seize the day! Perfect ending too! Pleasure reading you after a while. Hope 2025 is treating you well. Sending you light always

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/13/2025 3:27:00 AM

Chirping birds entertain with their melody. Wish I could hear them.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/10/2025 3:39:00 AM

Carpe diem. I wonder if birds vary their melodies into joy or sorrow.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/8/2025 1:01:00 PM

- Seize the day, Joseph :) - Lovely poem :) - hugs

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 1/7/2025 8:43:00 PM

A metaphor for hope,renewal,and potential.Nice to share.