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Promised Gleams

 The sky wears a peachy shawl
 Gentle ushering in the dawn
 There is a promised gleam of light

 Into this new day both joy and sadness will come
 Chirping birds entertain with their melody
 Leaving a song in the heart

 Bring in new ideas to rearrange the status quo
 Infinite possibilities lie ahead
 Favoring those who will seize the day

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David Crandall

February 3, 2025 at 6:50 PM

Hmm, I guess we should look at each new day as possibilities.

Valsa George

February 3, 2025 at 5:05 PM

A new day is a wake up call. The day gives a mixed bag of happiness and sorrow. Those who can seize the opportunities, each day offers is a winner in life. Beautiful thoughts in a well constructed poem dear Joseph.

Jennifer Proxenos

February 1, 2025 at 9:27 PM

Nice one Joaeph, each day brings it's own surprises, some happy some sad but taken in totality they make us stronger - Hope you have a wonderful day love your write. Blessings Jennifer

Joanna Daniel

January 28, 2025 at 2:55 AM

Carpe diem, Joseph:) nice one:)

Victor Buhagiar

January 23, 2025 at 1:38 AM

Nearly all my friends come from the USA, and all I read is how cold it is. Well, spring will soon come, and with it, some warmth.

Andrea Dietrich

January 13, 2025 at 9:36 AM

I agree with Ink. Peachy shawl is SO perfect here. Oh, I wanted you to know I like your contest idea. Sure do hope something comes to me!

Ink Empress

January 13, 2025 at 8:14 AM

I absolutely love the opening line in this dear Joseph! Such stunning imagery throughout. Favoring those that seize the day! Perfect ending too! Pleasure reading you after a while. Hope 2025 is treating you well. Sending you light always