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Just believe you will still be here When I will be here too. That I will heal sufficiently, To see you come right back to me. I want to be with you. Don't leave me all alone, I fear A life without your laugh. I want us wheeze in unison, No end while we have just begun... I know, I am no seer. Nor am I healer, or confessor, I'm just this loving kid, That crossed your path one day, No bigger, but smaller, lesser. Had no idea we'd fit Like fingers in a glove. Please say: "I'll be here when you return, I'll stroke your back, I'll kiss you, I'll be here because I yearn, Because I love... I love you". Just believe you will still be here, Because you want to be with me. I'll smoothe the creases in your brow, Wipe away your fear. If only please... Promise you will be here, That when I wake you'll be near. My virtual arms can hold us, We both fit there so nicely, Be here, for you, for me. *** March 21, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/30/2017 12:38:00 PM

Wow Darren :-) The depth of emotion is so beautiful. I feel quite moved by your words and the openness expressed. To become one with another, freely and wholly is love in its purest form. Superb writing:-) blessings xxx i am happy you are able to pop in here. The love soupers have for you will go far to help you heal and send your spirit soaring. Carolyn's poem for you, now POTD (yay!) is beautiful. The comments will fill your heart Darren :-)

Sara Ella

Date: 3/22/2017 9:24:00 PM

This is the perfect expression of Love <3 the comfort and the anxiety, the longing <3 Love this one Darren.

White Wolf

Date: 3/21/2017 9:12:00 PM

I just love your poetry, Duir! I love your soothsayer words so much!

Darren White
Date: 3/22/2017 1:43:00 AM

Thanks Budge, soothsayers have a way, don't they? :)

Deadd Accountt

Date: 3/21/2017 6:43:00 PM

Oooh I really like this one. This is a fav because specifically I love (lol) the way you did the "Because I love... I love you". I don't really know how to explain it, but that is perfect and very clear on how someone would say/express that. Nicely done!!

Darren White
Date: 3/22/2017 1:43:00 AM

Haha, don't worry, I understand what you are trying to say. And thank you for the fav! Means a lot to me :)

Mary Hoose

Date: 3/21/2017 4:50:00 PM

Darren my young friend this is so very lovely! This is exactly what your beautiful write of people in love expresses. I enjoyed your beautiful words so heartfelt and true.A '7' for sure my friend..Big country hugs and smiles to you. Mary :)

Darren White
Date: 3/22/2017 1:42:00 AM

Mary thank you so very much for your lovely comments to my poem, and for the 7 :)

Tim Smith

Date: 3/21/2017 6:14:00 AM

We can only have faith they will be waiting for us. Beautiful poem.

Darren White
Date: 3/21/2017 6:33:00 AM

Yes, that is all we can do, and hope! Thanks Tim.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2017 5:37:00 AM

Good morning Darren..I can feel the longing to be loved and waited for in this poem..Love across the distance so it seems..Your poem is like a beautiful song..with a wantom feeling..amd a begging for security and comfort.Awesome indeed.> Charma

Darren White
Date: 3/21/2017 6:03:00 AM

Charma, thank you for liking my poem :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/21/2017 4:46:00 AM

Good Morning Darren. Always do you reach the emotive factor. You have once again here in this entry. Love desire and much more come through your expressive words. Just marvelous in every way. Well done entirely. Have a wonderful morning.

Darren White
Date: 3/21/2017 4:53:00 AM

Good morning, Lisa :) Yes, love and longing, fear and emotions, everything tumbles over each other in there. Thank you, and you have a wonderful morning too.