Promise of Love

Was that real?? 
I raised my head and saw
A flower peach in color 
Real and breathing 
Yes, she was real

I looked her in the eyes
Her hands twinged in mine
My sight turned towards the ground
A shadow in suit embraced one in a long gown
As if a Disney prince just met the love of his life

Moving my fingers gently through her extended hair
I thought, what she was thinking while looking at the moon
She seemed to love light
While I was always fascinated by dark

Our silence annoyed the air
A chilling wave of gale blew through us
Shivering, she moved her head and hand
They were now resting on my chest
That serenity, that peace... I can't explain
  
Can't believe she accepted my proposal, 
But what now.... hearts beating fast
Thinking about future 
Light and dark, a perfect match? Or a mismatch? 
How would they get along

But why not to trust love
In front of which nothing else matter 
I whispered in her ear
She lifted her head up and smiled timidly 
Then said, let moon and stars be our witness 
She closed those eyes, as I kissed her softly
Moving her lashes with my lips
Breathing each other's breath
Time paused, as we landed in eternity

7th Sept. 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Goldsmith Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/ending. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Downing  Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 3:54 PM
Oh this is beautiful, I totally enjoyed it :)
Zahid Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 10:02 AM
Thank you ??
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 11:13 AM
Hello Paghunda Zahid, I like this poem you crea\ted. it is filled with romance. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 8:28 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Paghunda. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:26 AM
Hello Paghunda Zahid,you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Zahid Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Thank you Darlene
Proxenos Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 9:18 AM
'Time paused, as we landed in eternity' - so much in love, you both knew it was meant to be - and what a cute, down to earth, romantic tale, I LOVE it and I am going to fave it. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Zahid Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 5:49 AM
Thanks Jennifer for your kind comment
One Avatar
October 25, 2020 at 12:58 PM
Hey hope all is well.
Zahid Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 4:28 AM
Hello SO, I am well. Thank you.
One Avatar
October 12, 2020 at 5:01 AM
You make some really beautiful comparison between imagination and reality.. This is lovely poem...
Zahid Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 4:28 AM
Thank you Silent One.
George   Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 4:55 AM
Such a beautiful, romantic moment in time captured by your poetic talent. ~ Elaine
Zahid Avatar
December 3, 2020 at 10:13 AM
Humbled
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 5:52 PM
wow, what beautiful writing. Gotta put you as a followed poet!
Zahid Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 4:28 AM
:)
Ashley Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Paghunda, my heart and imagination was captivated in the bewitching spell of your beautiful love poem. I was deeply moved by the emotions and artistry of your precious pen. Congratulations for your excellent win.. ~Susan
Zahid Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Ah so nice of you. It is really hard for me to believe that my poem is this good....but thank you very much. Stay blessed.
Ibeh Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 9:44 AM
An awesome piece with splendid imagery, Paghunda:-) Congrats on your win!
Zahid Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Edward
Canerdy Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Paghunda, this poem is almost indescribably beautiful! CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
Mcintosh Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 4:38 AM
This is a truly inspiring and enchanting write. I love how you've left so many soft whispers of imagination coloring the words and phrases... it's a love poem that gifts the reader with flames of crimson joy and passion that flickers in it's reflection. I LOVE IT. God bless you
Zahid Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 4:44 AM
So nice of you... Thank you!
Mitra Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 11:59 PM
Beautifully painted....Congrats on your win Paghunda.
Zahid Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 1:14 AM
Thanks
Seeker Avatar
October 9, 2020 at 10:22 PM
Sublime & superb!
Zahid Avatar
October 10, 2020 at 1:15 AM
Humbled
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