- Promise Me Tomorrow -

For absolutely no reason at all
The storm was withered in the stagnant air
It seems so incredibly crystal clear quiet

Even if you wanted to paint ... no colors could express
Let this moment pass in quiet gratitude and joy
The real meaning of life bound with ribbon of love

When the sun wakes up tomorrow
Give me a kiss that says everything will be fine





A-L Andresen 27.05.2015 :)
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Hamilton Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 4:00 PM
Lovely descriptive and emotive write, wish I would have discovered your writings sooner, very nicely done!
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 3:22 AM
...... I have many ...... you are welcome :)))) - Thanks for visiting and comments, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Robertson Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 7:58 AM
Anne, you do lovely work, you are a true poet. I am still trying to find out what poetry is, all it's different forms. Now I know you are one I can use as a guide.
Andresen Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 10:31 AM
- I'm only a small "hobby poet" or a "kitchen table poet" ..... but thanks for beautiful words, Milton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hunjeri Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Well penned! Romantic, lovely and hopeful
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2015 at 5:46 AM
- Njeri, I'm glad you enjoy my poem - Promise Me Tomorrow - :) - Thanks for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Christian Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 2:08 PM
That is so beautiful Thanks for your kind feedback. I have not been in a while but as always God always brings a new season. Things are good got a new job which now gives more time to do poetry and compassion ministry. Just waiting to get on a team of soup run where u go out and give food to thé homeless. Church sorts it out we just take it out. Have a good evening
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 2:13 PM
- One enjoyable job, give to people in need - You're lucky .... and they are lucky to have you - Wish you all the best, Diane - Thanks for visiting and nice comments :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Raynes Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 8:54 PM
This is a promise I want someone to keep for me. A simple happy promise for tomorrow, i love it, thankyou for this poem.
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 3:27 AM
- I'll send you a hugs with desire for a good day tomorrow, Lewis - Thanks for visiting and nice comments :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Hello Anne-Lise . . . I forgot to mark the "7" in my previous comment, and so here goes with this note. Cheers, Gary
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 3:24 AM
............. and especially thank you for a "fav." and a 7 !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 2:57 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, The message portrayed here is indeed multi-level: A Storm; Passage of a Moment; Real Meaning of Life; and Sun Waking Up on the Morrow; and the Kiss of Affirmation. Incredibly powerful images presented with striking brevity. I really like this one!! 7 + FAV!! Best Always, Gary
Andresen Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 3:22 AM
- A kiss can say more than words - thank you for visiting and great comments, dear Gary - Always a pleasure to see you on my poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 31, 2015 at 10:38 AM
This poem is one of those multi-level creations that can be interpreted literally (weather) and then on the emotional side (tempest). Some disagreements do create stillness (in that communication ends). I suppose it is normal that storms occur in the household. I only wish (as expressed in this work of art), that all will be well soon. You are such an inspiration! You have given me a new visualization tool to use to bring back the sun. Very useful--thanks!
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 11:01 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Duke - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 8:01 AM
A special way to look forward to tomorrow, Anne Lise! Very lovely and romantic. Hugs // paul
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May 31, 2015 at 11:01 AM
- Paul, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Truly romantic and beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 11:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Monterey - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Macfarlane Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 6:59 PM
Beautiful Anne Lise!!!! Hugs
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2015 at 10:59 AM
- Cecilia, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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May 30, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Faving this Anne! Keith;-)
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 2:23 PM
- Thank you, I greatly appreciate one fav. Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 12:01 PM
"When the sun wakes up tomorrow" such a beautiful way to say that. 7++ :~) Hugs
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 1:24 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sibanda Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Simply beautiful, Andresen!
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 12:19 PM
- Ndaba, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mcdaid Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 4:42 PM
very beautifully painted a truly romantic pen anne lise
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 12:17 PM
- Liam, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - Always a pleasure to receive a visit from you my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Anish Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Sweet, romantic poem. Summer is just starting here in NYC. I hope you find what you are looking for! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Andresen Avatar
May 30, 2015 at 11:58 AM
- Matthew, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dome Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 1:06 PM
I knew this feeling very well a few times. a very profound and clever write. Well done best wishes. Pete.
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 1:34 PM
- Peter, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romaine Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:02 AM
Hey Anne Lise, stopped by for a visit and found this wonderful poem. I find it filled with hope! Beautifully written and expressed. Be Blessed, Neva
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 10:21 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Neva - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 9:01 AM
So romantic!
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 10:17 AM
- Richard, thanks for the nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gasun Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 7:35 AM
Absolutely beautiful and very inspiring write this is my very dear friend, Anne Lise! I'm Hugging tightly this precious gem and you! Thank you so much for sharing! Have a great weekend with lots of sunshine your way! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 10:17 AM
- Good to see you dear friend Leonora - Hope all is well with you - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Holmes Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:26 AM
nice realist write anne...and thanks for the comment!...peter
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:39 AM
- Peter, thanks for the nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 3:20 AM
this is so inspiring and well done, anne.. there's always a raibow!.. happy friday!.. huggs
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May 29, 2015 at 3:38 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Maxima Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 4:00 PM
Beautiful ,my friend Ilike this poem!
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 2:38 AM
- Stefan, thanks for the nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:35 PM
sweet line: life bound with a ribbon of love!!Love the ending line too.
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 2:39 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Martin Avatar
May 28, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Good read,Anne! Great actually. . . A short poem that says it all. You wrote it so well, even memorable, especially the last two lines.
Andresen Avatar
May 29, 2015 at 2:38 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Thomas - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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