Promise Me Cowboys

She had golden hair and a pickup truck      
The girl was pullin' a U-Haul trailer
She came home to stay and to change her luck
Just to get shed of a blue eyed sailor

The girl was pullin' a U-Haul trailer
Promises were packed with purpose in mind
Just to get shed of a blue eyed sailor
Who lied and wasn't the marryin' kind

Promises were packed with purpose in mind
Cowboys she knew would replace that young salt
Who lied and wasn't the marryin' kind
Men who rode horses possessed no such fault

Cowboys she knew would replace that young salt
Then she would be free of men who might row
Men who rode horses possessed no such fault
She could just smile again and dance real slow

The girl was pullin' a U-Haul trailer
She came home to stay and to change her luck
Just to get shed of a blue eyed sailor
She had golden hair and a pickup truck

5/20/2017
For contest Favorite Pantoum for Lara Loo
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Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:37 PM
Nicely done Pantoum and great flow ,Larry, congratulations on your win ~*
Bradfield Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Thank you, Eve!!
La France Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 4:03 PM
Larry congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
Bradfield Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:43 PM
Thank you and thanks for sponsoring a fun contest
Y. Avatar
June 3, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Hi Larry? I really enjoyed this write. You a did a good job with the form. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Bradfield Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 10:43 PM
Thank you Alexis..you're very kind!
Duet Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 2:48 PM
This is definitely a FAV for me. Just love it. I've never tried an pantoum but after reading this delightful poem maybe I will.
Bradfield Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Thank you, Carole. I'm so glad you liked it!!
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