Promise, I Do

I am the promise of I DO
a declaration, a vow made by two
to stay together their whole lives through
to meet life's struggles, great or few.

And yet, how often vows do die
upon the altar of selfish "I"
instead of two, who fail to try
to work things out, their love revive.

I DO made before God and man
is sacred, important to understand
I DO is more than "maybe I can"
it binds two hearts to meet life's demands.

I am the promise of I DO
a solemn vow that is made by two.



Written on 5/22/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
June 6, 2017 at 7:31 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win ~*
La France Avatar
June 5, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Laura congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem
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June 3, 2017 at 10:20 AM
Hi Laura, What a well written poem and message. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis
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May 30, 2017 at 10:07 AM
Such a beautiful poem, this is your fifth poem,which I m reading and all of them are brilliant, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Wang Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so much for this poem! I'm using it for my 9th Grade poetry project as an example of personification. It's really good!!
Leiser Avatar
May 25, 2017 at 2:06 PM
What a wonderful compliment, Jackson! Thank you for your kind words!
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 5:01 PM
Your poem speaks to those couples who give up too soon, who let hardships pull them apart instead of bringing them closer together. It is so true nowadays when more than half of marriages end in divorce. This is a beautiful poem Laura. I hope it does great in the contest! 7 ; )
Leiser Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 9:03 PM
Thanks, Connie. I'm glad you like it. It takes work, but I am still married to my love for almost 39 yrs. now!
Haight Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 4:11 PM
Laura, your poem is priceless and I adore the wonderful message embedded in your personification that is also a Monorhyme. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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May 22, 2017 at 2:52 PM
This was wonderful Laura. This line, I DO is more than "maybe I can" was fantastic. That one line says it all in my opinion. This amazing poem should do very well in the contest
Leiser Avatar
May 22, 2017 at 2:54 PM
Why, thank you, Chris! One of the hardest promises to keep, yet with the help of God, it can produce a strong marriage that is pleasing to Him, I believe :)
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