Promise Breaker

i've loved. 
i've lost. 
and for you i paid the cost. 
i've suffered enough. 
time's up! 
why did you always make promises that you could not keep? 
why were you so quick to deceive? 
shut your mouth. 
quit lying from in between those teeth. 
i have no use for you. 
i'll longer be lead astray by empty words. 
i hope you get exactly what you deserve. 
i'll never forget the way i wept over the promises you never kept. 
wasting time away. 
i was wasting my time. 
so blind. 
deceived by your countless number of lies. 
i'll let this die. 
i'll let it die. 
i won't cling on to the past. 
i'm done with you. 
and when karma comes around, baby it'll haunt you. 
so remember promise breaker when this is finished and complete that you were the one to 
lead yourself down a road of demise and defeat. 
will you have remorse? 
will you have regrets? 
for all the promises you never kept. i have no pity for you after all the pain and heartache 
you have put me through. 
i'll let this go. 
i've pulled myself away from this threshold. 
i'll let karma come back to bite you. 
and when you feel weak and your heart is shattered i will have reversed this pattern and i 
will rid myself of this misery. 
how will you feel when you're on your knees? begging. 
pleading. 
this is all your terminal disease.
 i'm finally letting go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/13/2009 10:24:00 AM
you say i wont, i say i told you so, im done with this abuse of my fragile little heart, im fighting back, i wont let you tear me apart, i wont waste another night of tears, waiting for you to pick me up from here, waiting for you to wipe away these tears, no, im letting go, like i know i should have done, so very long ago....xo Raiin...
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Date: 11/13/2009 10:22:00 AM
demise, ill no longer listen to your pitiful lies, why would you do this to me, why would you bring to my knees, lying in my misery, face down, in my misery, i loved you, my feelings were true, i would have done anything for you, and you left me, left me for dead, gave up on me, what were the last words you said, that you loved me but you hated me so, that im worthless and i should go, broken, no, ill be no longer broken, choking on these tears, for you, ill leave them here, finally letting go
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Date: 11/13/2009 10:19:00 AM
it hurts so bad, this pain making me so sad, my heart bruised, feeling just used, and you took so little care, your love you never shared, leaving me weak and broken on the ground, with hallow words to make me sleep sound, sound, did you hear that sound, my heart healing just a little now, reversing this pound, giving you back your terminal disease, no longer will i beg of you on my knees, ill be free of this terminal pain, because im letting go before i go insane, youll be bit and bring your
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Date: 11/10/2009 3:06:00 PM
Interesting and sad for lost love. Keep writing. Thanks for your comments on my work. Sara
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