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Promise

Promise
Moon held and made
bathed-beams of love sonnets
dried by sun's own romantic pledge
of streamed warm rays on love's future solace ~
As days then nights honed my prayers
my pain slow climbed sky stairs
and found you there
Promise




... CayCay Jennings
August 31, 2018

Copyright © CayCay Jennings | Year Posted 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/18/2018 6:22:00 PM Hello Cay Cay, One word Beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply

Carole Duet Date: 9/13/2018 3:27:00 PM What an unusual poem dripping with romance and love! Congrats on your placement CayCay. Login to Reply

Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 9/11/2018 3:12:00 AM Congratulations,CayCay on your win. Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/10/2018 9:35:00 PM This is so beautiful CayCay! I think I faved this one too. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo Yep, I just checked and it said previously added to favorites. My favorite part is "my pain slow climbed sky stairs and found you there" hugs, Connie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/10/2018 5:37:00 PM I almost forgot this is one I had seen of yours and faved, Caycay. I am so happy to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Line Gauthier Date: 9/10/2018 3:16:00 PM Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 9/2/2018 10:38:00 AM Really nice Cay Cay. Pain climbing sky stairs to find.... I admire. Love Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 9/1/2018 7:43:00 AM A beautiful one, CayCay:) Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 9/1/2018 10:18:00 AM Thank you, Jo. First time I used, or even heard of the form and I did enjoy creating with it. Be well! ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/31/2018 4:50:00 PM Wow Caycay...I absolutely adored this remarkable Rictameter! I hope to see it win top honors! I am putting it into my faves! : ) xxoo Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/31/2018 8:50:00 PM Wow, you make me feel good! I admit such enthused comments give me a great core rush that isn't a bit brain/ego related, it is other and I feel you feel what I'm saying. Love and appreciation ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/31/2018 3:34:00 PM wow, this is a FAVE for me. So beautiful. Wish I could see more. GOtta go to eye doctor appt now. Don't even have times for my mail!! Hugs! Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 8/31/2018 9:34:00 AM Beautifully done my friend. This felt so soft and smooth as I read it today. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/31/2018 2:13:00 PM Hey, one who I wish read as I free fall thru soup when time permits its stingy intervals! So good to see you. Thank you for your 's' words, I love them both! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Paul Callus Date: 8/31/2018 9:30:00 AM I believe that both the sun and moon have conspired to bring you rays of love, CayCay! I hope that promise will not be broken:) Regards // paul Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/31/2018 2:11:00 PM Your comment is beautiful prose that I'm delighted to have, Paul. Thank you. All the best ... CayCay

Charlie Smith Date: 8/31/2018 8:54:00 AM What a great form, very well captured with your verse, love it, best wishes... Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/31/2018 2:10:00 PM My smile and heart agree that I love that you love it. Means volumes - all good! Thank you, Charlie. Be content ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux Date: 8/31/2018 7:51:00 AM A cool form and very effective piece. I think this promise will be realized. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/31/2018 7:57:00 AM Thank you very much, Richard. All the best ... CayCay

John Gondolf Date: 8/31/2018 7:33:00 AM Beautiful imagery in this promise of love, CayCay. Good luck in the contest. John Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/31/2018 7:42:00 AM Thank you, John. I love having your presence on my 'pages.' Be blessed ... CayCay

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/31/2018 5:58:00 AM What a mesmerizing imagery dearest, CayCay! Good luck my friend! Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 8/31/2018 7:41:00 AM Thank you, Demetrios. May joy be yours today. Hugs ... CayCay