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Promise

Promise
Moon held and made
bathed-beams of love sonnets
dried by sun's own romantic pledge
of streamed warm rays on love's future solace ~
As days then nights honed my prayers
my pain slow climbed sky stairs
and found you there
Promise




... CayCay Jennings
August 31, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/18/2018 6:22:00 PM
Hello Cay Cay, One word Beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 9/13/2018 3:27:00 PM
What an unusual poem dripping with romance and love! Congrats on your placement CayCay.
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Date: 9/11/2018 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations,CayCay on your win.
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Date: 9/10/2018 9:35:00 PM
This is so beautiful CayCay! I think I faved this one too. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo Yep, I just checked and it said previously added to favorites. My favorite part is "my pain slow climbed sky stairs and found you there" hugs, Connie
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Date: 9/10/2018 5:37:00 PM
I almost forgot this is one I had seen of yours and faved, Caycay. I am so happy to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/10/2018 3:16:00 PM
Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 9/5/2018 3:47:00 AM
Beautifully written with lovely imagery, CayCay. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 9/2/2018 10:38:00 AM
Really nice Cay Cay. Pain climbing sky stairs to find.... I admire. Love
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Date: 9/1/2018 7:43:00 AM
A beautiful one, CayCay:)
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/1/2018 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Jo. First time I used, or even heard of the form and I did enjoy creating with it. Be well! ... CayCay
Date: 8/31/2018 4:58:00 PM
I love this. That phrase “my pain slow climbed sky stairs” just made me catch my breath with joy. I’m actually falling in love with this form - I love how it expands then closes, it’s very seductive somehow. And you used it to its full potential!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 8:46:00 PM
Me?, or Connie down there? You made me use horrible grammar! I have a great time every time I thank you for your presence, certain faces just become synonymous with my smile. Nina, I'm not playing if I'm meant to count the times I've filled these rectangles with redundancy and I'll cheat if necessary. Have a joyous way with life ... CayCay
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Nina Parmenter
Date: 8/31/2018 4:59:00 PM
See I used the word “love” 3 times there- that’s your fault - you made me gush!
Date: 8/31/2018 4:50:00 PM
Wow Caycay...I absolutely adored this remarkable Rictameter! I hope to see it win top honors! I am putting it into my faves! : ) xxoo
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 8:50:00 PM
Wow, you make me feel good! I admit such enthused comments give me a great core rush that isn't a bit brain/ego related, it is other and I feel you feel what I'm saying. Love and appreciation ... CayCay
Date: 8/31/2018 3:34:00 PM
wow, this is a FAVE for me. So beautiful. Wish I could see more. GOtta go to eye doctor appt now. Don't even have times for my mail!! Hugs!
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Date: 8/31/2018 9:34:00 AM
Beautifully done my friend. This felt so soft and smooth as I read it today.
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 2:13:00 PM
Hey, one who I wish read as I free fall thru soup when time permits its stingy intervals! So good to see you. Thank you for your 's' words, I love them both! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Date: 8/31/2018 9:30:00 AM
I believe that both the sun and moon have conspired to bring you rays of love, CayCay! I hope that promise will not be broken:) Regards // paul
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 2:11:00 PM
Your comment is beautiful prose that I'm delighted to have, Paul. Thank you. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 8/31/2018 8:54:00 AM
What a great form, very well captured with your verse, love it, best wishes...
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Date: 8/31/2018 2:10:00 PM
My smile and heart agree that I love that you love it. Means volumes - all good! Thank you, Charlie. Be content ... CayCay
Date: 8/31/2018 7:51:00 AM
A cool form and very effective piece. I think this promise will be realized. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/31/2018 7:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Richard. All the best ... CayCay
Date: 8/31/2018 7:33:00 AM
Beautiful imagery in this promise of love, CayCay. Good luck in the contest. John
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, John. I love having your presence on my 'pages.' Be blessed ... CayCay
Date: 8/31/2018 5:58:00 AM
What a mesmerizing imagery dearest, CayCay! Good luck my friend!
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CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, Demetrios. May joy be yours today. Hugs ... CayCay