CayCay Godwin Poet Rictameter

promise

PROMISE
moon held and made
bathed beams of love sonnets
dried by sun's own romantic pledge
of streamed warm rays on love's future solace ~
as days then nights honed my prayers
my pain slow climbed sky stairs
and found you there
PROMISE

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Darlene De Beaulieu September 18, 2018 at 6:22 PM Hello Cay Cay, One word Beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.

Carole Duet September 13, 2018 at 3:27 PM What an unusual poem dripping with romance and love! Congrats on your placement CayCay.

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 11, 2018 at 3:12 AM Congratulations,CayCay on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong September 10, 2018 at 9:35 PM This is so beautiful CayCay! I think I faved this one too. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo Yep, I just checked and it said previously added to favorites. My favorite part is "my pain slow climbed sky stairs and found you there" hugs, Connie

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2018 at 5:37 PM I almost forgot this is one I had seen of yours and faved, Caycay. I am so happy to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations.

Line Gauthier September 10, 2018 at 3:16 PM Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Anisha Dutta September 2, 2018 at 10:38 AM Really nice Cay Cay. Pain climbing sky stairs to find.... I admire. Love

Joanna Daniel September 1, 2018 at 7:43 AM A beautiful one, CayCay:) CayCay Godwin September 1, 2018 at 10:18 AM Thank you, Jo. First time I used, or even heard of the form and I did enjoy creating with it. Be well! ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong August 31, 2018 at 4:50 PM Wow Caycay...I absolutely adored this remarkable Rictameter! I hope to see it win top honors! I am putting it into my faves! : ) xxoo CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 8:50 PM Wow, you make me feel good! I admit such enthused comments give me a great core rush that isn't a bit brain/ego related, it is other and I feel you feel what I'm saying. Love and appreciation ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich August 31, 2018 at 3:34 PM wow, this is a FAVE for me. So beautiful. Wish I could see more. GOtta go to eye doctor appt now. Don't even have times for my mail!! Hugs!

Chris Green August 31, 2018 at 9:34 AM Beautifully done my friend. This felt so soft and smooth as I read it today. CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 2:13 PM Hey, one who I wish read as I free fall thru soup when time permits its stingy intervals! So good to see you. Thank you for your 's' words, I love them both! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Paul Callus August 31, 2018 at 9:30 AM I believe that both the sun and moon have conspired to bring you rays of love, CayCay! I hope that promise will not be broken:) Regards // paul CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 2:11 PM Your comment is beautiful prose that I'm delighted to have, Paul. Thank you. All the best ... CayCay

Charlie Smith August 31, 2018 at 8:54 AM What a great form, very well captured with your verse, love it, best wishes... CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 2:10 PM My smile and heart agree that I love that you love it. Means volumes - all good! Thank you, Charlie. Be content ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux August 31, 2018 at 7:51 AM A cool form and very effective piece. I think this promise will be realized. Good luck in the contest. CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 7:57 AM Thank you very much, Richard. All the best ... CayCay

John Gondolf August 31, 2018 at 7:33 AM Beautiful imagery in this promise of love, CayCay. Good luck in the contest. John CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 7:42 AM Thank you, John. I love having your presence on my 'pages.' Be blessed ... CayCay

Demetrios Trifiatis August 31, 2018 at 5:58 AM What a mesmerizing imagery dearest, CayCay! Good luck my friend! CayCay Godwin August 31, 2018 at 7:41 AM Thank you, Demetrios. May joy be yours today. Hugs ... CayCay