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Promise

Promise Moon held and made bathed-beams of love sonnets dried by sun's own romantic pledge of streamed warm rays on love's future solace ~ As days then nights honed my prayers my pain slow climbed sky stairs and found you there Promise ... CayCay Jennings August 31, 2018

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/18/2018 6:22:00 PM

Hello Cay Cay, One word Beautiful. Have a nice evening my friend.

Carole Duet

Date: 9/13/2018 3:27:00 PM

What an unusual poem dripping with romance and love! Congrats on your placement CayCay.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 9/11/2018 3:12:00 AM

Congratulations,CayCay on your win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/10/2018 9:35:00 PM

This is so beautiful CayCay! I think I faved this one too. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo Yep, I just checked and it said previously added to favorites. My favorite part is "my pain slow climbed sky stairs and found you there" hugs, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2018 5:37:00 PM

I almost forgot this is one I had seen of yours and faved, Caycay. I am so happy to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations.

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/10/2018 3:16:00 PM

Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 9/2/2018 10:38:00 AM

Really nice Cay Cay. Pain climbing sky stairs to find.... I admire. Love

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/1/2018 7:43:00 AM

A beautiful one, CayCay:)

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/1/2018 10:18:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. First time I used, or even heard of the form and I did enjoy creating with it. Be well! ... CayCay

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/31/2018 4:50:00 PM

Wow Caycay...I absolutely adored this remarkable Rictameter! I hope to see it win top honors! I am putting it into my faves! : ) xxoo

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 8:50:00 PM

Wow, you make me feel good! I admit such enthused comments give me a great core rush that isn't a bit brain/ego related, it is other and I feel you feel what I'm saying. Love and appreciation ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/31/2018 3:34:00 PM

wow, this is a FAVE for me. So beautiful. Wish I could see more. GOtta go to eye doctor appt now. Don't even have times for my mail!! Hugs!

Chris Green

Date: 8/31/2018 9:34:00 AM

Beautifully done my friend. This felt so soft and smooth as I read it today.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 2:13:00 PM

Hey, one who I wish read as I free fall thru soup when time permits its stingy intervals! So good to see you. Thank you for your 's' words, I love them both! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Paul Callus

Date: 8/31/2018 9:30:00 AM

I believe that both the sun and moon have conspired to bring you rays of love, CayCay! I hope that promise will not be broken:) Regards // paul

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 2:11:00 PM

Your comment is beautiful prose that I'm delighted to have, Paul. Thank you. All the best ... CayCay

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/31/2018 8:54:00 AM

What a great form, very well captured with your verse, love it, best wishes...

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 2:10:00 PM

My smile and heart agree that I love that you love it. Means volumes - all good! Thank you, Charlie. Be content ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/31/2018 7:51:00 AM

A cool form and very effective piece. I think this promise will be realized. Good luck in the contest.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 7:57:00 AM

Thank you very much, Richard. All the best ... CayCay

John Gondolf

Date: 8/31/2018 7:33:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this promise of love, CayCay. Good luck in the contest. John

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 7:42:00 AM

Thank you, John. I love having your presence on my 'pages.' Be blessed ... CayCay

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/31/2018 5:58:00 AM

What a mesmerizing imagery dearest, CayCay! Good luck my friend!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/31/2018 7:41:00 AM

Thank you, Demetrios. May joy be yours today. Hugs ... CayCay