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Prometheus Unbound

To gaze on your form reveling in lassitude ankles crossed arms cradling a lolling head, is to know mystery. Unwritten tomes etch the surface of furrowed brow. Eyes arrayed in perpetual humor, the brawn of chest rising and falling with satisfied breath speaks only of peace. To gaze upon your form in wonder such a precious gift. Maleness surmounts you from the arch of your cheek bone to the blue black flutter at your wrists. You shall be used unabashedly as all artists do my Prometheus my fire my muse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/5/2020 1:28:00 AM
I loved this piece Debbie. You are a talent. The imagery while reading this was so real. Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:57:00 PM
I find this to be a very HOT poem....I love your descriptions of your Prometheus....enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/30/2010 3:37:00 PM
Ornateness in poem of Romantism form Deborah.Smile! Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 1/28/2010 5:00:00 PM
Hi Deb- The poem that I wrote, Who Will Watch Mother is just a poem. My mother is alive and well, but thanks for your kind words. ed
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Date: 1/28/2010 3:33:00 PM
You have painted quite an interesting, although somewhat mysterious, picture with words. This poem flows freely. Love, Dane
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Date: 1/27/2010 4:46:00 PM
This is charming romanticism poetry Debbie.. luv it.. saw your comment on Jared's new posting and thankxxx for your great opinion.. some others did not think it Soup worthy.. appreciate your input .. it was fun collaborating with these two guys and being expressive in the "luv" department of life... thankxxx also for a wonderful contest that u sponsored and congrats to u and all the winners on a great theme ... luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:53:00 PM
Excellent write Deborah! So eloquent, beautiful! Goes to my favs.! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:30:00 PM
DEb~ You've out done yourself this time just a joy to read The language alone deserves positive attention 10 stars from me ! Laura :)
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Date: 1/27/2010 2:35:00 PM
This is awesome, Deborah. I had not paid attention to the title and was thinking perhaps you were describing a husband or a son. haha. But what man could live up to this!! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/27/2010 1:10:00 PM
One of the best writes I have read in a long time....well done...TAH
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