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Prometheus

Time is fading on the ocean's flow. Through my window I can see the maneuvers of a burning night. All the handles I invite lost into the waves of the full moon. And I am forgetting each name and direction. In front of a figure's shapeless fault beneath the show's sudden halt I watch my mind's dim reflection. Mirrors broken before I see. Traces lost before I walk. And I always knew that Prometheus was not a God. He was committed to a truth that was untold to a fire that we could never hold. Destiny flows in our veins while time is fading still forming absence on the wind until vanity forgives us.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/2/2011 1:54:00 AM
Congratulations Valeria on your win in Pd's contest :) WN
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Date: 6/2/2011 1:20:00 AM
Congrats on your big win in P.d's contest
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:54:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Valria. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., valeria
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Valeria. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:30:00 AM
Another great one valeria!~ CONGRATS!! In my first poem contest, & thank U so much once again 4 supporting my contest. I had a great time reading & judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. always~~~Poet D
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Date: 5/31/2011 9:42:00 PM
congrats valeria on your excellent win in this contest luv .. enjoy..
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:45:00 AM
Very intriguing..this piece tickles a personal interest in said Prometheus and I was glad to hear your creative words on the topic..!
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