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Prologue to Springtime

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Written: April 22, 2024 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Whimsical whispers of spring wallow, Awakening from nature's languid tingle. You were maundering to strike back, A euphonic kaleidoscope garden bloom. Switching back won't suffice this time, Changing seasons can't be tucked away. In the depths of the spring warmth,                 Embedded in the depths of your being. Whispered by Equinox, an alias I once knew, We are in a nexus by a motley thread. In a world so bright, all else fades away, I'll remain adorned in pristine periwinkle.

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Date: 4/25/2024 6:21:00 AM
This is so exquisitely delightful dear Sotto. I love every line and your descriptive words with the arrival of spring and its awakening. I love the opening line especially. Also,’ In a world so bright, all else fades away’. So enjoyed reading and admiring it as always from your unique, gifted pen. Blessings to you.
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Date: 4/24/2024 9:57:00 PM
As Nature wakes up from her wintry nap, spring arrives with teeming colors and vibrant life. This poem celebrates the thrill of anticipation of a better phase of life. With spring, "a euphonic kaleidoscope garden blooms". Lovely image. There is much lyrical beauty in this poem.... ! " I'll remain adorned in pristine periwinkle." An arresting conclusion.
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Date: 4/23/2024 12:11:00 PM
This poem poem captivates with its vivid imagery and lyrical language, drawing the reader into the enchanting realm of spring's arrival. The opening lines evoke a sense of anticipation and renewal as nature stirs from its winter slumber, while the phrase "whimsical whispers of spring wallow" conjures images of delicate blossoms and gentle breezes.
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Date: 4/23/2024 11:28:00 AM
Nice poem, depicting beauty of spring. Enjoyed!
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Date: 4/23/2024 4:58:00 AM
Reveling in beauty and serenity of spring--a delightful poem, my friend. Much enjoyed.
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Date: 4/22/2024 11:32:00 PM
Ill stay adorned in pristine periwinkle! How beautiful is that last line and everything about this is just so very poetic and eloquently woven in such a captivating manner dr sotto! I love it! Especially “ Switching back won't suffice this time, Changing seasons can't be tucked away. In the depths of the spring warmth,”i think this is one of my most faves written by you! So creative and artistic while also theres so much depth! Pleasure always reading your work. Best wishes
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Date: 4/22/2024 10:36:00 PM
Sotto, this is lovely! Enjoyed! Don
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Date: 4/22/2024 8:15:00 PM
The overwhelming colors of spring are now in bloom. I liked how you started softly, slowly with a beginning garden and ended with a vignette of the speaker looking from the outside.
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Date: 4/22/2024 3:32:00 PM
Your descriptive lines made for a captivating read, dear Sotto. I especially liked 'whispered by Equinox...' The last line illustrated a beautiful aspect of spring. Wishing you a pleasant evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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