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Progression of the species

subtle satin nature’s aid to man’s creation, subtle satin sleepless nights of lavender spin yet embracing mediation our love of procreation, subtle satin. © Harry J Horsman 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/22/2012 5:21:00 PM
oooh, here is one "smooth as satin" I got lucky and found two on this page that were new for me. Let me see if you won. dang I don't see any congrats down here in the comments. I love the alliteration btw!
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Date: 9/21/2011 3:58:00 PM
Good wordplay today Harry, and well put togther, all the best for the contest..
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Date: 9/15/2011 12:13:00 PM
Interesting arrangement of words to spin this story. I love your creativity! :)
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Date: 9/15/2011 11:52:00 AM
Just beautiful Harry..I was not familiar with this form but am starting to love it...BG
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Date: 9/15/2011 8:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us today Harry. Let the words continue to flow from your pen. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/14/2011 3:35:00 PM
Ah, the "love of procreation" adds such a subtle touch of passion to this beautiful poem. Like the alliteration in the "subtle satin" line, Harry. Welcome back! It's great to see you posting again. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/14/2011 3:35:00 PM
woven in satin.....love satin!!
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Date: 9/14/2011 12:25:00 PM
oh so lovely a weave of satin Harry my friend.. provocative and passionate lines.. good luck in the contest .. always a treasure to read u luv..
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