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An endless corridor of locked doors is forever. A fine line borders what is to be and never. There is a balance of new beginnings with each end. Time brings elements of creation. What will it send? Will rhythm expire with a severance of connection? It is undetermined how this will attain perfection. The future is forever, and what will be its qualities? Progression is achieved as I deploy my proclivities. Join me to elucidate the unknown everywhere. Enlighten the spirits and make them become aware. My life’s course is strewn with mines. I move furtively as I traverse the lines.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/8/2011 12:16:00 PM
Well said! Normally I give up when words in a poem reach beyond my tiny vocabulary but this one was worth the word search lol.
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:48:00 AM
We encounter many land mines as we progress through life, Robert. Sometimes the distinction between endings and beginnings seems vague to me. Just like you, I move "furtively" into the future. Excellent, thought-provoking poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2011 9:32:00 AM
Love this fine piece of work. Seven. Take care. Dana'lynn
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Date: 2/8/2011 6:56:00 AM
Life has a lot of ups and downs , beginnings and endings and some unknowns and we all travel down the road of life Enjoyed this poem this morning. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/8/2011 4:56:00 AM
Life is uncertain for sure..When things get tough the tough get going...Enjoyed your work of seemingly famous quotes turned into a poem..Of course, I know that is not what it is..Your presence at my work always brings delight..Sara
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