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PROGRESS A plastic sun, paper moon, painted sky of blue End will come very soon no matter what we do Manmade plants, not so nice but real ones never grow Have a go toss the dice, one above and six below Odds all fall against you, no one wins today Some try but only just a few, yet no one gets their way Our world is no use anymore even man can be replaced In time the human substitute will be a brand new metal race

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Date: 1/31/2016 7:44:00 PM
Maureen, A great pleasure to find and read your poem today. Love -- SKAT --
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Date: 12/15/2010 5:19:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us through your poetry here at PoetrySoup Maureen. My time for reading and commenting will be short until after the New Year. So, today I send a wish from my house to yours. Have a Joyous Holiday and a Happy New Year. Please remember the sick and hungry in your prayers daily. Do all you can to help in anyway you can. Love and blessing, Carol and Family (Your smile can warm a heart)
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Date: 12/15/2010 5:00:00 AM
Interesting theory, Maureen - well expressed. Liz
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