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Upon a turtle sat two snails in readiness burning a new trail!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/15/2009 12:47:00 PM
Interesting use of this concise form for a thought provoking poem. I really liked the last line--intriguing. Nice one! Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Have a wonderful day! Karen
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Date: 5/15/2009 1:01:00 AM
This is great. So much truth in this one. Great imagery. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/14/2009 5:12:00 PM
oooo loving the image. -Alley
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