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Productive Hesitation

Oh, so you’ve seen better days?
So your shadows walked straighter before,
You’re who you are 
and you’re not getting any younger 

You said to count me in
Well now I’m counting my blessings

One at a time
to remind me what will be there when you’re not 

Is the past behind you?
It seems more like its calling you out to your face

These messages that you ignore 
are open doors to the future

Open them wide
so you and your ego can fit inside them 

Oh, and how it hurts to be so right
all the time 

Your phone is your only life support 
and now it’s leading you to 
become the things you hate about yourself 

It’s ironic how you don’t see it,
looking in a mirror half your life

(She’s on the rise again)
She’s gonna be an internet star!

I’d count your blessings while you can
Your phones your only life support 



Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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