Production of the Replica

The midday sun scorches her back
Sweat seeps through her feeble body
As her nerves carry messages from her brain 
To make her muscles cooperate
So she could stand and move around

Inside her body a helpless guest with very special needs
Hanging head downwards between cliffs of her bone
Shot with delicate spasms
With hair painted upon his skull

The wretched visitor did not  come out until it was ready
The stress of delivery became more and more
In only nine months the single fertilized cell 
became a fully developed baby.
An amazingly complex organization of some billions of cells

Undeterred, she kept on pushing relentlessly but fatigued
The midwife held some materials attached to a dinner-plate-size device
Shouting: Push! Push! Push!
Swinging hand to and from across the deep hole
Dropping to different directions and starts digging

With urgent jabs the small head penetrates the hard earth.
Could it be a female?
Could it be a male?

As the hole deepens, eyes were strained for a hint
Suddenly, ears quicken as the high-pitched whistle 
Descends to a guttural clicking noise—A sure sign
that the visitor has arrived
After the production, how tired she was!

Behold, I shall celebrate this diligent producer
For she has done the toughest job a woman could do
In pain she produced her replica
In joy should she reap the reward
Sweet mother, will I ever forget you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/31/2016 4:13:00 AM
Thank you Victor. Happiness and joy to you.
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Date: 12/29/2016 4:20:00 PM
An amazing poem, Adeniji. To write about one of the most remarkable miracles done by God w/such brilliance is outstanding. Great poem, my poetic friend. And the replica was you ... that is creative genius. A front row view, eh. Loe this poem. Peace and joy to you.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/30/2016 12:43:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Greetings to your daughter, much love to you.
Date: 12/29/2016 3:41:00 PM
Mothers are simply awesome, even with the thought of child birth. You wrote this delivery story real well, I could picture it. Beautiful poem Gideon, as always.
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Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon
Date: 12/30/2016 12:38:00 AM
I'm thrilled with your encomium, Abosede. I really do appreciate your inspiring comment.
Date: 12/29/2016 2:44:00 PM
Thank you for checking by, Olillio. Hugs, Adeniji.
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