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Problematic Pink

colour
crashes in
like waves
tossing and
turning

all senses 
blurring
words begin 
slurring

engulfed in
a hue
she can't think

move or
anything


in the pink






May 23rd 2019

Charlieku New Form Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina

Copyright © Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart | Year Posted 2019

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Eve Roper Date: 5/26/2019 9:57:00 PM Maureen, very sad and nicely done, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/27/2019 7:01:00 AM Thank you Eve, xomo :)

Charles Messina Date: 5/25/2019 8:25:00 PM I love this one, Maureen. Congratulations on your win. :) XOCM Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/27/2019 6:59:00 AM Thank You Charlie! I love it too ;) Thank you for the prompt! xomo

Joseph May Date: 5/25/2019 7:35:00 PM Congrats on your win Mo... Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/27/2019 6:58:00 AM Thank you Joseph :) xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/25/2019 1:37:00 PM - Congratulations on your great suggestions, Maureen ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/27/2019 6:56:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise! 'twas a fun one! I have a wee heap of scratched efforts before this one came together ;) xomo

Arturo Michael Date: 5/25/2019 8:18:00 AM In the pink...is magical...Nice write Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/27/2019 6:54:00 AM It is! ;) And the blue, the gold, the green... I'm addicted lol <3 Thank you Arturo! xomo

Timothy Mcguire Date: 5/25/2019 12:16:00 AM I love this poem WELL done! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/27/2019 6:51:00 AM Thank you Tim!!! I was looking at that contest for ages, something finally sparked in time for the last spot ;) xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 5/24/2019 9:10:00 AM Creatively fresh and fuchsia pen flava is this lovely rose-scented poem, Maureen. Very cool write. Love and smiles and smiles of joy. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/27/2019 6:49:00 AM Freddie! Thank you sweet friend, Love and Hugs your way! xomo

Peter Dome Date: 5/23/2019 1:03:00 PM Very clever and curative. very well done. lovely image. pete. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/24/2019 6:24:00 AM Curative, I like that :) Thank you! Colour certainly is curative, Spring says it all.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/23/2019 9:56:00 AM I love this verse! Whirling with it! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/24/2019 6:23:00 AM Wheee! ;D Thank you Kim! xomo

Jeff Connelly Date: 5/23/2019 8:01:00 AM Sounds like she might be also in the red Maureen. Nice color images for my mind. Thank you. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 5/23/2019 8:03:00 AM Into the red? It's too early for that. Thank You.