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Problematic Pink

colour crashes in like waves tossing and turning all senses blurring words begin slurring engulfed in a hue she can't think move or anything in the pink May 23rd 2019 Charlieku New Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/26/2019 9:57:00 PM

Maureen, very sad and nicely done, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2019 7:01:00 AM

Thank you Eve, xomo :)

Charles Messina

Date: 5/25/2019 8:25:00 PM

I love this one, Maureen. Congratulations on your win. :) XOCM

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2019 6:59:00 AM

Thank You Charlie! I love it too ;) Thank you for the prompt! xomo

Joseph May

Date: 5/25/2019 7:35:00 PM

Congrats on your win Mo...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2019 6:58:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :) xomo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/25/2019 1:37:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great suggestions, Maureen ... a fun contest :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2019 6:56:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise! 'twas a fun one! I have a wee heap of scratched efforts before this one came together ;) xomo

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/25/2019 8:18:00 AM

In the pink...is magical...Nice write

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2019 6:54:00 AM

It is! ;) And the blue, the gold, the green... I'm addicted lol <3 Thank you Arturo! xomo

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/25/2019 12:16:00 AM

I love this poem WELL done!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2019 6:51:00 AM

Thank you Tim!!! I was looking at that contest for ages, something finally sparked in time for the last spot ;) xomo!

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/24/2019 9:10:00 AM

Creatively fresh and fuchsia pen flava is this lovely rose-scented poem, Maureen. Very cool write. Love and smiles and smiles of joy.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/27/2019 6:49:00 AM

Freddie! Thank you sweet friend, Love and Hugs your way! xomo

Peter Dome

Date: 5/23/2019 1:03:00 PM

Very clever and curative. very well done. lovely image. pete.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/24/2019 6:24:00 AM

Curative, I like that :) Thank you! Colour certainly is curative, Spring says it all.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/23/2019 9:56:00 AM

I love this verse! Whirling with it!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/24/2019 6:23:00 AM

Wheee! ;D Thank you Kim! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 5/23/2019 8:01:00 AM

Sounds like she might be also in the red Maureen. Nice color images for my mind. Thank you.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/23/2019 8:03:00 AM

Into the red? It's too early for that. Thank You.