Probe

sunray glitters
on a silken thread
toddler’s finger
reaches for the
spider web



Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~DARK CLOUDS~ 2020

AP: 2nd place 2022

childinsectsummersunfree verse

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Vijay Pandit

June 13, 2019 at 2:49 PM

You are so very good at short, succinct poetry..it takes a special talent to "show" it in just a few words like you have done here..congrats on your win, Line.

Line Gauthier

June 13, 2019 at 9:19 PM

Thank you so much, Vijay. Most appreciated.