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fallen fruit exists
earthen harvest and ground meet
jars in the pantry

Robert J. Lindley ,07-24-2014

creationearthlifemathphilosophyhaiku

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 12/29/2023 8:27:00 PM

Robert, Here's to jars in the pantry. -Richard

Jim Dunlap

Date: 5/12/2020 3:11:00 PM

BON boulot. Good job on this senyru. I like it.

Ann Foster

Date: 1/2/2020 9:57:00 AM

This was fun. It made me remember my grandmother's pantry...full of beans and carrots and lovely stuff. Well written as always... great stuff. Ann

J Hamilton Gist

Date: 8/19/2015 3:53:00 PM

Makes me think about the Last Days, very deep.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/22/2015 9:12:00 PM

The title gives this piece gives it an enigmatic slant, and makes me ponder on our mortality. Which makes it a very clever Haiku, and a fave. Thanks, Robert. Regards, Viv

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/22/2015 10:40:00 AM

Hi Robert: a beautiful haiku conclusion to a coalition of harvest and ground. My compliments.

Lee Carter

Date: 7/21/2015 3:53:00 PM

That was supose to be a smile face not ? Lol

Lee Carter

Date: 7/21/2015 3:51:00 PM

I love this... I want to put it up in my kitchen ??

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 7:10:00 PM

A clever write Robert, sounds good enough to enjoy...mmmm..Linda

Saba Khan

Date: 7/27/2014 7:13:00 PM

That's really good Robert! :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/25/2014 10:15:00 AM

Why probably contest entries closed ? Oh my bad ! Didn't notice that ,,,, lol yes !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/25/2014 9:22:00 AM

Wow that's a lovely factual haiku Robert! Loved much,, sure to place high!

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/25/2014 9:49:00 AM

Thanks my friend. Will not place at all if I can not find the contest to enter it!! lol

Gry Christensen

Date: 7/25/2014 12:09:00 AM

This is nice and original! Nice to meet another who sees so much beauty in fruits to write about it! :) I like this Haiku, it shows to me like I mentioned above, both a pretty unique theme, approach on Haiku (I'm far from a Haiku expert though) . I favourited this one and I will keep my fingers crossed for you in the contest!

Robert Lindley
Date: 7/25/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thanks much, deeply honored that you added it to your fav list! Beauty is its own reward and should be appreciated wherever one finds it.

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