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Probabilities fallen fruit exists earthen harvest and ground meet jars in the pantry Robert J. Lindley ,07-24-2014

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Date: 5/12/2020 3:11:00 PM
BON boulot. Good job on this senyru. I like it.
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Date: 1/2/2020 9:57:00 AM
This was fun. It made me remember my grandmother's pantry...full of beans and carrots and lovely stuff. Well written as always... great stuff. Ann
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Date: 8/19/2015 3:53:00 PM
Makes me think about the Last Days, very deep.
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Date: 7/22/2015 9:12:00 PM
The title gives this piece gives it an enigmatic slant, and makes me ponder on our mortality. Which makes it a very clever Haiku, and a fave. Thanks, Robert. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/22/2015 10:40:00 AM
Hi Robert: a beautiful haiku conclusion to a coalition of harvest and ground. My compliments.
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:53:00 PM
That was supose to be a smile face not ? Lol
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Date: 7/21/2015 3:51:00 PM
I love this... I want to put it up in my kitchen ??
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Date: 7/29/2014 7:10:00 PM
A clever write Robert, sounds good enough to enjoy...mmmm..Linda
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:13:00 PM
That's really good Robert! :)
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Date: 7/25/2014 10:15:00 AM
Why probably contest entries closed ? Oh my bad ! Didn't notice that ,,,, lol yes !
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Date: 7/25/2014 9:22:00 AM
Wow that's a lovely factual haiku Robert! Loved much,, sure to place high!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/25/2014 9:49:00 AM
Thanks my friend. Will not place at all if I can not find the contest to enter it!! lol
Date: 7/25/2014 12:09:00 AM
This is nice and original! Nice to meet another who sees so much beauty in fruits to write about it! :) I like this Haiku, it shows to me like I mentioned above, both a pretty unique theme, approach on Haiku (I'm far from a Haiku expert though) . I favourited this one and I will keep my fingers crossed for you in the contest!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/25/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thanks much, deeply honored that you added it to your fav list! Beauty is its own reward and should be appreciated wherever one finds it.
Date: 7/24/2014 11:18:00 PM
Reminds me of my childhood Robert!
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Robert Lindley
Date: 7/24/2014 11:58:00 PM
Mine too my good friend!! lol We boys had the chore of carrying grandmother's many , many jars of preserves way out to the storage cellar and carefully stacking them exactly as she commanded! And she didn't tolerate any goofing off!!!